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riventhorn March 31 2010, 18:24:43 UTC
I recently discovered the fairy tale this fic is based on--and this was a wonderful retelling of it! I especially loved Uther's and Ygraine's characters. And poor Leon with his string--lol! I loved that! And the last line was perfect :)

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thedreamygirl April 12 2010, 18:00:13 UTC
Thank you! :) I was wondering what someone who knew the original would think of it, so I'm glad you enjoyed this retelling - and Uther and Ygraine's characters. I haven't really written for them before so I'm very pleased you liked them. :)

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templa_otmena March 31 2010, 20:00:20 UTC
I COULD GOBBLE THIS FIC UP! Second time that I've read it in less than 24hours :D

I'm sending it to Emily!

Thank-you for sharing! xXx

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thedreamygirl April 12 2010, 18:00:53 UTC
THANK YOU MISSY! *love, hearts, etc*

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starry_laa April 2 2010, 10:35:44 UTC
Finally finished reading and what a wonderful fic!

I just loved all the characters- Arthur, Leon, Merlin, Marie...

This was such a rich story and I loved every moment. I particularly loved the scene where Arthur was finally able to cry and break the enchantment, that was wonderful.

You did a brilliant job in adapting the fairy tale to fit the Merlin world and make it your own.

I loved the epilogue too- <3 Merlin playing tricks on Arthur!

Thank you for sharing this.

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thedreamygirl April 12 2010, 18:03:10 UTC
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your leaving comments to all the other parts too, I'm really glad you liked it. :D

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genstarwen92 April 4 2010, 14:16:40 UTC
This was a fantastic read!! YAY Arthur cried and broke the enchantment and the EPILOUGE was adorbs :D and the last line :)

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thedreamygirl April 12 2010, 18:04:18 UTC
Thanks very much for your comment - and your comments to all the other parts! :) I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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hmsharmony April 5 2010, 03:17:31 UTC
This was absolutely terrific! I'm so glad I finally had the time to read this (I knew I would want to read it in one go, so I was waiting until I had a nice chunk of time available). This was really quite an odd fairytale (I wiki-ed it, and wow...), but you made it work. I love how you incorporated all of the major players and the sweet development of Arthur/Gwen.

You clearly put a lot of time and effort into this fic and it shows. It's incredibly well written and definitely in the vein of fairy tales I read as a child.

So much love for this fic. <3

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thedreamygirl April 12 2010, 18:07:20 UTC
Oh thank you so much! I know when I first found the fairytale on wiki I was like "...whut?" and then got annoyed at my brain for wanting to Merlin-ize it lol but I'm really glad you felt it worked, and enjoyed it. :D

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