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theellibu

Steve/Danny, NC-17

Jan 28, 2012 14:01

Here we go, then.

Title: Down on your knees (we can settle these debts in the sheets)
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: NC-17
Summary: "So, you're saying, you don't remember kissing me in my kitchen before telling me that you just ate a whole pineapple and that I should be begging to give you a blowjob?"

A/N: A while ago, finduilas_clln wanted someone to write fic ( Read more... )

sometimes i write, steve/danny, book em danno

Comments 28

maldeluxx January 28 2012, 14:25:47 UTC

Funny *and* hot, I like that XD :)

theellibu January 28 2012, 21:03:23 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

lupina78 January 28 2012, 14:32:06 UTC

Damn, that´s hot! *is in need of a cold shower now*
What a great story! Thanks for writing and sharing!! Going to put this to my memories!
♥

theellibu January 28 2012, 21:22:26 UTC

*fans you* I aim to please ;) Glad you liked it so much <3.

crzymm3 January 28 2012, 14:33:36 UTC

Oh god that was perfect!!!!!

theellibu January 28 2012, 21:22:55 UTC

Thank you :D :D :D

finduilas_clln January 28 2012, 14:49:02 UTC

ALSKJLDMSKDFMLSK!!!!!!

Steve being all smiley and casual, wandering into Danny's apartment isthe best thing ever!

"So, you're saying, you don't remember kissing me in my kitchen before telling me that you just ate a whole pineapple and that I should be begging to give you a blowjob?" Steve pauses, amusement clear in his eyes. "I'm hurt, Danno."
BEST LINE IN A FIC EVER.

"Fuck, Steve," Danny whispers, watching as Steve slides to the floor, kneeling between Danny's legs as his hands grab the waistband of Danny's pants.
This. THIS. The thought of Steve sliding to his knees, kneeling between Danny's legs... HOLY SHIT. This is hot beyond hot!

And the whole sex scene... just... I feel like I need to light a cigarette or something.

I LOVE YOU AND NOW I WANT TO MARRY YOU EVEN MORE! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

theellibu January 28 2012, 21:31:16 UTC

Well, he's called Smooth Dog for a reason, isn't he? Let's just assume it wasn't a sarcastic nickname ;)

Heeee, I'm glad you liked that line. When I saw that second TFLN graphic, I just knew they'd go so well together XD

I have such a kink for Steve on his knees, it's not even funny. He'd look so fucking hot, nnnggghhhh.

YAY! I'm glad you liked the porn :D

I LOVE YOU TOO. AND YOU'RE VERY WELCOME, HUN. ANYTIME ♥

finduilas_clln January 29 2012, 15:03:45 UTC

I have such a kink for Steve on his knees, it's not even funny.
I understand this well. :)

♥

sexycazzy January 28 2012, 15:21:09 UTC

totally blew my mind away...

theellibu January 28 2012, 21:23:36 UTC

I aim to please ;D Thank you so much for reading :)