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[Fic] Beginnings and Ends

Jan 03, 2009 02:38

Title: Beginnings and Ends
Author: Elli [theevilpuppy]
Fandom: The Mentalist
Spoilers: 02x09 "Flame Red" but it's really just mentions of things that were said in the
episode.
Pairing: Patrick/Teresa
Word Count: 2557
Rating: PG-13
Summary: For a view precious moments he closes his eyes and pretends that she is his and that there is more to life than an empty ( Read more... )

ship: patrick/teresa, tv show: the mentalist, fanfic: the mentalist

Comments 41

wickedandcruel January 3 2009, 03:16:34 UTC

YES YES YES *off to read*

btw- did yo uread the awesome jane/lisbon xmas smut? It's really really good.

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 10:58:38 UTC

First of... OMG YOU SCARED ME because it took me like 15 minutes to figure out that it was you with the new user name and all. I was ready to cry over the fact that you had defriended me. *lol*

Anyways, I hope you enjoyed this first attempt at fanfic because partly I wrote it for you and billy_red_ocean after our awesome discussion here a few weeks back. I love this show so much, it might be my death one day. :p

Also...O_O...Jana/Lisbon smut???!!! How did I miss that?! FAIL! *runs off to read*

wickedandcruel January 3 2009, 15:00:39 UTC

LOLOLOL I'm sorry, I keep forgetting that people are gonna be shocked until hey get used to it. I made an entry tho, so hopefully everyone will see.

YESSS and goos smut. it's a really sweet fanfic.

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 15:12:33 UTC

I hadn't checked my flist yet by the time I noticed that you were "gone" and was scared there for a moment but yeah, I've seen the entry in the meantime. No worries, I'm cool now.:p

I'll read that fic tonight when I have more time and can really enjoy it. *grins*

yaboiksar January 3 2009, 04:10:05 UTC

You are an amazing writer. Very well done and perfectly in character. This was beautiful and so accurate.

Good job!

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 11:01:15 UTC

*blushes*

OMG, thank you so much. I was so worried about the characters and about whether all of this made sense but I'm glad you liked it and that maybe it didn't turn out too bad, especially since this is the first fanfic I've ever written.

Thanks again for the lovely review!♥

yaboiksar January 3 2009, 13:55:41 UTC

It was my pleasure!

Trust me, I know about worrying over your fan fiction. I do it every time I post something even though no one has said they've hated anything. And I don't have near the eloquence that you have, heh.

You got nothing to worry about.

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 16:19:32 UTC

And thanks again. I don't even know what to say but your comment put a smile on my face that will stay there for a looooooong time. ^_^

I guess everybody is worried about putting their stuff out there and being judged by others. I don't think that's something I'll ever get used to. However, this was so much fun to write and I'm just glad you had fun reading it.

streetcatx January 3 2009, 05:15:17 UTC

It was really beautiful. :)

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 11:02:29 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm super glad you enjoyed this and that it made sense to someone else but me. :p

♥

muldy January 3 2009, 06:36:47 UTC

I love this fic still so much. And it totally makes me miss The Mentalist - so I'm gonna have to bug you to write more fic for me (although I know you're currently sleeping so I'll give it another 8 hours or so until I start prodding!)

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 11:06:30 UTC

You have no idea what that means to me coming from such an amazing writer.♥

Also, thanks so mcuh betaing this for me! I'm not sure whether I have another story in me. I might be a one-trick-pony *lol* and right now I have term papers to take care of but I love this show so freakin' much that I'm sure gonna try to write more.

Only another 4 days till a new ep!!! *dances*

wickedandcruel January 3 2009, 15:02:02 UTC

OMG SO MUCH ANGST.

I... love this. This was mind blowing really. It's kind of like I see their relationship. It's never going to be just roses and sunshine, or hardly that, b/c Jane just has too much darkness in him.

btw- just a little nitpicky, Lisbon's eyes are green ;)

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 15:09:33 UTC

*blushes*

OMG, thank you so much!♥ I was so scared to post this because by the time I had finished it I thought it was all kinds of wrong.

I'm so glad you liked this. Yes, if they were ever to be in a relationship it wouldn't be easy or normal but that's what's so intriguing about them as a couple. AS you can see though, I couldn't help but let love win in the end. ^_^

btw- just a little nitpicky, Lisbon's eyes are green ;)

They are?! O_O OMG, I think I'm colorblind. FAIL!

Edit: You're right, they are. I'm the captain of the USS fail!boat. *lol* Changed that right away though.

wickedandcruel January 3 2009, 15:29:55 UTC

It's wonderful, seriously. I like how you managed to show progress to Jane's behavior without making it fast or slow, but believable.

They are lol. And canon confirmation is when Jane buys that green necklace and says it matches her eyes.

eta: lol you edited your comment just as I was posting haha

theevilpuppy January 3 2009, 15:59:39 UTC

Stop, or I'm going to melt into a puddle of blushing goo. *lol*

I can't believe how much fun it was to write this story and it makes me so happy that it apparently turned out good. I guess 'believable' is the greatest compliment of all.

You're right. I checked the opening scene from Flame Red and there they were, sparkling green. No idea what I had seen there before but thanks for pointing it out.