Brigit's Flame entry for December, Week 1: The Masquerade

[thefaeway]

Finally getting back to brigits_flame after over a year! WELL THANK YOU BASIC TRAINING! Now I'm back to participate in the December contest. The prompt for week 1 was "Cue" and as I read some relative terms, I was instantly reminded of this video by Natalie Merchant. Great song, great video, great inspiration. Hopefully great enough writing to get me to

Comments

[jamais_toujours]

Love the twist in this. The dialogue between Molly and Gary was great, they zinged off each other. Good luck :).

[thefaeway]

Thanks :) That's what I was aiming for, primarily. It's my first real attempt at such focused dialogue :)

[rephen]

I enjoyed reading this. The interactions between the characters are great and their dialog very much convey their personality. The end was very humourous. Welcome back to the Flame! :D

[thefaeway]

Thanks! :D

[toxic_apiaceae]

Oh, this was brilliant! Absolutely brilliantly done. I really loved the turnabout in the end between the two of this. Great use of the prompt, too, by the way.

This is definitely one of my favorite entries this week. Thanks for sharing!

[thefaeway]

Thank you so much! I appreciate it :D

[blythe025]

Love it. Great writing. Great dialogue. And very interesting characters. Well done.

[aruna_now]

I love the story... it must be really hard on you, this third poll :) Hope you get to the next round.

[thefaeway]

Thanks :) Third?! Wow.. I hadn't even noticed, yet. haha! If I make it, I make it... if I don't, I've got next month to try again. :)