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theferretgirl

Original Fic Idea

Jul 26, 2009 17:39

Remember that Original Fic idea that wouldn't go away? I managed to write some of it down and thought to post it here so you can all shoot it down.

Go on. Shoot. Make it go away.

( Once upon a time... )

Comments 18

chlare July 26 2009, 15:52:01 UTC

I still think it's fun.

A bright purple sky. Up at the two suns and the three moons. And no stars or clouds. Not because there aren't any stars or clouds but because it's daytime and because it's a really sunny day.

Like that bit with your dry sense of humor. :) And the bit about Kansas being cliche.

lets call it a dog for the sake of argument and because it's simpler for the imagination, after all there's nothing like visualization. That and, well, it's a dog.

The little asides like that? Totally fun.

The guy wrinkled his nose.

Because, really, ick.

See, I had to laugh at that part. I mean, c'mon, squeamish about dog drool? :)

All good fun, I tell you. *nods*

theferretgirl July 26 2009, 15:55:11 UTC

My humour is so dry the Sahara shies away from it. Ahahahahahaha! Right, moving on.

And srsly, dog drool is *so* ick! I should know!

You're supposed to shoot at it. Shoot! Shoot!

chlare July 26 2009, 16:04:05 UTC

Pshaw, I don't even have a gun.

theferretgirl July 26 2009, 16:06:04 UTC

How about lethal sarcasm words. Lethal words can be good? Popgun? Potatogun? Slingshothtingy?

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angelique5666 July 27 2009, 17:41:26 UTC

I really like the little details of how he realizes how cliche it would be to say that he wasn't in Kansas anymore and how he usually doesn't swear. I'm also dying to know why the little dog is drawing a line. I'd love to see this fully done if you have the time and inspiration.

Sorry late to respond. I'm behind on my friend's entries!

theferretgirl July 28 2009, 04:13:47 UTC

Awww thank you. :-) I have to be honest, I have no idea why the dog is drawing a line. Heh.

I'm afraid this will be all there is. People who say they only write for themselves lie, and the lack of response I got on this kinda put me off writing more. C'est la vie.

strangecreature August 6 2009, 05:44:04 UTC

Aw, glad you pimping this! I miss your dry humour... it gives your stories a terrific hint of Douglas Adams... and this is definitely an intriguing start to something! :-D