The Sixth Sin

Jun 29, 2013 00:52

This story randomly came to mind, so I figured I'd just write it. From time to time, I just get ideas for fics and they demand to be written. I guess that's what LJ is for. A dumping ground for my ideas ^^; Almost all, if not all, my fics are probably going to be Asagi x Tsunehito.

Title: The Sixth Sin
Pairing: Asagi x Tsunehito
Genre: Fluff, ( Read more... )

d, asagi x tsunehito

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write_my_dreams June 29 2013, 00:09:14 UTC
The visual of Tsune wanting to kiss Asagi but being anxious about it is just adorable. As is Minya with his paw on Tsune's head, looking so curious about what his human is doing.

I have a funny idea of Asagi and Tsune having sex and Tsune being mortified when Minya starts swatting at his necklace

Cute how Tsune had to hide from Hide-Zou. And ohh, jealous Tsune indeed for biting Asagi like that. I do like how you made Tsune a little more dominant here, being the one who bites Asagi and is the one to act out Asagi's vampire fantasies.

I'm sure jealous Tsune will be quite pleased with himself whenever he sees that mark on Asagi's neck

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thefinalpansy July 1 2013, 14:53:24 UTC
Thanks for reading~ I'm glad you enjoyed it (and that it triggered something in your mind too :D)
I just read your latest Asagi x Tsune fic - so cute!!! I'm weak against shy Asagi >.

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write_my_dreams July 9 2013, 02:22:45 UTC
You're welcome. Oh no, I had that idea sometime last year when I was just starting to write Asagi x Tsune. It went into my pile of ideas that are fun but I'm not going to write.
Oh you did? I did get pretty discouraged after posting it since it felt like no one read it. Made me disinclined to work on that particular series given the lack of interest. Shy Asagi is always sweet

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toki_no_koe June 30 2013, 22:27:08 UTC
Hi!
I read your story and I appreciated it a lot! I like your writing style, it's very clear and detailed at the same time, reading your fic has been a pleasure. By the way, I really love this pairing, so I'm very happy to read some fluff~
The part with Minya is lovely, I can totally picture it in my mind, and I laughed wholeheartedly seeing how Tsunehito panics when Hide-zou arrives... poor Hide XD
I really like how Tsunehito decides to take the initiative and I loved the image of him pushing Asagi against the wall, the whole scene is just perfect to me.
Thank you for this lovely fic!

Oh, and sorry for any mistakes! English is not my native language, so my fluency is far from good.

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thefinalpansy July 1 2013, 14:54:44 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a kind comment! And don't worry about your English, it's totally fine <3
The good news is, probably all my fics are gonna be Asagi x Tsunehito, so there'll be more to come ^o^

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