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[thefireeternal]

This chapter cheesed me off in a number of ways. It was like pulling teeth to write it, and when it was actually written, it just didn’t quite work. I don’t know what it was, but I feel that there’s something off about the flow. It might be that it’s mostly a filler chapter, with important stuff tacked on the end. Gah, I don’t know. I definitely

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[rosefyre]

I thought it worked, but I'm not the writer - we often judge our own work more harshly, after all.

I would imagine Rissa's hair would be bad for continuity, unless you were obsessive about playing AND filming in order, which isn't always easy.

Yeah, I've got amusing shots from within an angled piano, too, from my RR. Of course, it can also lead to cute toddler-under-the-piano pictures.

HI TARA! :D

Can't wait for 7.8! :D :D :D

[themorganlegacy]

I hate updates that feel like this to write, where you finally just give up and post it because you're sick of fighting with it. My latest interlude was just like that. *sigh*

I really liked the Rissa and Theo scene, though! And actually the pictures where your walls are down I wouldn't have even noticed, because they look like they were meant to be that way rather than that the walls are down. *shrug shrug* I am sort of unobservant that way, I guess. Except when it comes to my own work. But then, isn't that always the way? Heh.