All of them, lies - Domlijah

[thefrenchgirl2]

So this is a sequel to Empty, which you can find in my journal. :)

[My writing is kind of odd at some points in the story... I think it was maybe because of the bad mood I was in when I wrote this... But in the end, it doesn't turn out too bad!]

Title : All of them, lies

Author : Emy (thefrenchgirl2)

Pairing : Domlijah implied, Pam/Elijah, Dom/Evie

Rating : R

Comments

[elisamaria]

This seems so sad and hopeless. I love the writing and hope things get better for both and that they don't despair. They need to be together.

[thefrenchgirl2]

Thank you ! =)

[randomdarling]

This is beautifully dark. I feel so sad for what Elijah is putting himself through. I love your writing.

PS: Would you mind if I added you as a friend? :)

[thefrenchgirl2]

Thank you !

And of course, you can add me as a friend =) !

[lireeli]

Oh, so sad and beautiful! Mince, c'est vrai que je suis avec une compatriote ! Je peux écrire en français. J'adore les " Hurt/Comfort stories"... Mais y aura-t-il une " Comfort part" ? Il faut attendre et voir :)
En tout cas, magnifique "angst part"!

[thefrenchgirl2]

Oh, enfin, de la langue française dans le Domlijah ! x)
Merci beaucoup pour le commentaire et oui, normalement il y aura une "Comfort part" car, toutes les plus belles histoires qui commencent mal ont toujours cette tendance à bien se finir bien, n'est-ce pas ? =) [ Contraire du dicton "Les plus belles histoires se finissent toujours mal" ]
En tout cas, je suis heureuse que cette histoire plaise ! =)

[moit]

Absolutely loving this.

And then, memories flow : Elijah, wearing the shirt and plane white boxer shorts, entering his kitchen with an I’ve-just-been-shagged morning hairdo, his eyes bright, simply looking beautiful; Elijah, kissing him like there’s no tomorrow; Elijah, underneath him, pleading him, begging him to go harder, faster.

Love that paragraph.. the imagery is hot, and yet it just PULLS at your heartstrings. I love the though of New Zealand as a pleasant dream that had to end. Can't wait to see where you go with this!

[lijahlover]

TBC is such a good thing!