Mistmatched - Chapter 1/? - Part 1/2

[thefrenchgirl2]

Title :  Mismatched - Chapter 1/? - Part 1/2

Author : Emy (thefrenchgirl2 )

Pairing : Orlijah (for the moment), but with up-coming Monaboyd

Rating : R (this part)

Disclaimer : You know, I love making hot Hollywood-boys kiss each other, and then put them into angsty situations, but seriously… who’d believe this has happened in real life? (We never know, my name could

Comments

[moit]

I'm so glad we finally figured this out. ^_^

But since I am anal-retentive, and I was re-reading.. I was thinking you should change

“Ay! Don’t blow smoke on me, my hair’s going to smell all… clove-y.”

to

"Oi! Don't blow smoke on me blahblahbalh..."

I think he'd me more likely to shout OI!

[thefrenchgirl2]

Done! Haha :D Yeah, we've made it finally! :) *hugs*