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Waves (The Cruise Ship AU)

May 01, 2009 16:08

Title: Waves (The Cruise Ship AU)
Author: mcrdrugist
Pairing: Bob/Gerard
Rating: PG-13 (for now)
POV: Gerard
Summary: Gerard and his five year old daughter Lily are on a cruise for gay and lesbian parents and their children that is being sponsored by the ILGA (International Lesbian and Gay Association). What happens when Lily meets and befriends another ( Read more... )

erika, bob/gerard, waves, fic

Comments 11

restinpiecesluv May 1 2009, 22:43:51 UTC

I love this already! I like how you wrote it so that Lily is his number one priority, which is realistic, but he's still his own person, y'know?

^_^

XoxO
Maggie Massacre ™

mcrdrugist May 2 2009, 01:29:40 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad I got the dynamic of the relationship right. I wanted it to be like Lily is everything he ever needs, but sometimes he gets what he thinks is a selfish urge to have someone to take care of him.

I'm probably gonna update once or twice a week so stay tuned!

ana_lyze May 2 2009, 03:21:50 UTC

I read the summary and just went nuts.
AUs tend to be my favorites, and this concept's crazy original and sounds very potentially adorable.
Also, you really had be at Gee/Bob, tbqh. <3

mcrdrugist May 2 2009, 03:57:36 UTC

I have a serious addiction to kidfic AU's. Funny thing is I got the idea when some chick won a cruise. I was like that has never been done before...

Glad you enjoyed yourself!

xferardforverx May 2 2009, 03:49:32 UTC

ahhh im loving it already! :D
i think its totally cute how Lily is everything to him :'D
cant wait for more<3

mcrdrugist May 2 2009, 04:02:00 UTC

I really wanted to get the point across that she is his everything, but sometimes he just craves adult company.

Thanks for the comment.

xferardforverx May 2 2009, 04:21:38 UTC

well you did a great job.
youre welcome :)

washingbasket May 2 2009, 22:14:00 UTC

Ahhh!
This AWESOME
Gee :D <3
Lily!
Aww :D
Ilu already Srysly :D

mcrdrugist May 3 2009, 00:21:51 UTC

Thanks!

I'm so glad you are liking it!

xcassielovex March 5 2010, 05:15:14 UTC

so was this never cont.?

exoticway March 5 2010, 05:20:59 UTC

Pretty much all my stuff is on hiatus while I finish my last couple months of high school. This Summer I am planning a writing binge, so be on the look out. And because some people have asked I am still going to be writing Bob. I refuse to give that up.

This is mcrdrugist btw.