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[Summer; Jousting] Hero of Another Story 1.2

Sep 01, 2015 23:00

Title: Hero of Another Story
Author: alchemicink
Rating: G
Fandom: Hey!Say!JUMP
Pairing(s)/Focus: Gen fic, Keito-centric
Length: ~14,300
Summary: Keito thought the hardest thing in his life was the possibility of making a fool of himself on national TV. He never expected to get stuck in Medieval England with his bandmates and participating in a ( Read more... )

rating: g, season: summer, day 1, fandom: hey!say!jump, sport: jousting

Comments 12

anonymous September 5 2015, 06:44:42 UTC

Does LJ has any option or button which help me comment on every paragraph?

Full of details and gags, lively, awesome!

alchemicink September 5 2015, 19:26:06 UTC

LOL that would be a great feature on LJ, wouldn't it? ^_^ I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story! Thank you for reading and commenting :)

singchronight0 September 5 2015, 06:46:35 UTC

The comment above came from me.
I forgot to log in earlier ^^;

alchemicink September 5 2015, 17:04:28 UTC

It looks like your comment didn't show up :( At least, I don't see it anywhere

But thank you for reading though <3

gameseason_mod September 5 2015, 17:21:45 UTC

we apologize for the error. the comment is now visible :)

alchemicink September 5 2015, 19:24:39 UTC

Thank you mods! <3

juju905rote September 5 2015, 19:31:42 UTC

Hello, I'm Beni. Wow Hey Say Jump and medieval times, two things I really like combined together in one fic!

Keito should be more confident in himself! I like his friendship with Chinen :)
Also "Heisei Knights" from France XD

And so cute, how each of them makes friends w/ their horses. Can they bring the horses back to Japan with them?
And...it's hard to mention all of them, but I love all the little jokes and humorous moments :)

alchemicink September 5 2015, 20:41:37 UTC

Hi Beni!! Thanks for reading! :) It was a lot of fun to write JUMP in medieval times

Keito totally should listen to Chinen! ^_^

Aw, it would be funny if they had brought the horses back! Although I think Hikaru is probably tired of chasing his around. lol

Thank you again for reading and commenting! I'm happy you enjoyed the fic! <3

hyukbins September 6 2015, 04:31:26 UTC

the reading was so great and fun, the humor was spot on and the storyline was sooooo niiiiiice, their antics were the best part of everything for me (it set the mood..........i think that's how i can explain it) and i loved the chinen/keito friendship ahhh so beautiful, everything was remarkable

alchemicink September 7 2015, 00:27:16 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Their crazy antics were definitely my favorite parts to write. And I think Chinen and Keito's friendship is something that needs more love :D

turtleheartz September 9 2015, 13:34:00 UTC

HOLLY!!!! I'M FINALLY HERE TO COMMENT ON THIS FIC I'M SORRY I TOOK SO LONG BUT HERE I AM <33333

I LIKE THE ENTIRE WAY THIS WAS SET AND TIME TRAVEL OMG TIME TRAVELLLLLL SO CUTE. gonna livecomment this whole thing because THERE IS SO MUCH GOING ON IT'S SO FUN :D

i love the way this starts hehehe

“Will you stop poking me?” Keito snapped at his bandmate, Yaotome Hikaru, who had been happily hitting him in the side with the blunt end of his spear for the past five minutes. is it bad that i ship this a little

ahhh chinen i love that he’s so perceptive. ♡ “pinching you in sensitive places” HAHAHAHA very forward too

“Wait for meeee,” he shouted after them. “I need to take off my pants!” YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS.

LIKE THE HUMOUR AND WHY HE HAD TO TAKE OFF HIS PANTS

NOT THE FACT THAT HE ISN’T WEARING ANY.

BECAUSE HE IS.

ANYWAY. HEISEI KNIGHTS!!!!! makes them sound all cool but then if they said it as “Hey! Say! Knights!” they’ll lose the cool xDDD

“What could possibly go wrong?” Aaaaaaand the short ( ... )

alchemicink September 11 2015, 01:45:30 UTC

LISAAAAAA these comments were the highlight of my day yesterday <3 <3 <3

Keito/Hikaru is totally shippable. :P They would be an absolute mess together tho lol

Yuto and the pants joke was my favorite part. I AM GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT. :D

To be honest, deep fried oreos are suuuuper weird tasting. But still pretty good! You should totally try them if you ever have the chance

I'm still not over the amazingness of your Painter!Yabu, Frenchgirl!Takaki idea. LISA PLS.

I never miss an opportunity to talk about Takaki's hair lol >___>

((you could say he….got off his high horse…….hurhur)) i c whut u did thar and i approve /thumbs up

Hahahaha THANK YOU for sharing your reactions and which parts made you laugh! <3 ON TO THE NEXT PART!