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Dec 01, 2005 00:15

my essay for Juilliard, due today. Any comments welcome ( Read more... )

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oh how i miss these tonyvasquez1988 December 2 2005, 00:07:45 UTC
I once did a last minute essay.
For my College world History class....its rocked

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Re: oh how i miss these tonyvasquez1988 December 2 2005, 00:27:06 UTC
one thing
this school is going to look deep into your acting history and they are going to find out that you havent been VP very long. So instead of starting that sentence with that, what about as an induceted member.
and you can folow it up with mentioning that you were recently elected Vice president.

also as a member it is 500 hours a year. Officer well over 500 hours.
and if you ever won top ten thespians or anything in the theatre competition mention that.

also voulenter acting, such as communty theatres or other things like that old folks place. that looks really good on applications.

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the_stadler December 3 2005, 04:04:05 UTC
Hey jessica! This comment is a bit late, but I like the essay alot. I hope you get accepted. I know how nerveous it can be to wait to hear if you got in. I went through it last year. But if I can be accepted to a video game school, then I am sure that you can get accepted into this school too.

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