My Old Negro Spiritual

[thegoldenlife]

This is a poem I wrote, let me know what you think

Comments

[shinecryzephyr]

i think you're beautiful jordan. i love you!

[midnightsphinx]

Wonderful poem. And chocolate is beautiful. Mmmm.. chocolate.

[passionfrooot]

That's so wonderful. I'm not the type of person that understand poems, but this is truly wonderful, magnificent. ( i don't think i spelled that right) It's really does give a message and it's good that it can come from people so young nowadays.

Good job, and I totally agree!

[uhhh_what]

ddeeeeeeeeeeeamn.

that was deep. love you for you no matter if you were purple or orange.

[shinecryzephyr]

well, i dunno. purple or orange might be a little scary. what if it meant he was radioactive or something :P

[dance_for_rain]

beautiful

~emma