Yeah.. I don't know what to think about my last story. When I finished it, I wasn't too happy with it. So I decided to take on a prompt and try again
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awww. I like angry!concerned!Dean here. You wrote it specifically as opposed to it just being general angry concern, it was how Dean would be angry and concerned., and it was a nice touch to let Sam see Dean's face was red. I'd actually kind of like an extension on this from Dean's POV, cause something like this would seriously wreck Dean, and the hug at the end was so cute. Great job! Good job with Sam's POV, also. Just a nice simple way to let us know how messed up he is without hitting us over the head with how messed up he is. kudos! crazytook
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kudos!
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;D
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