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Fiction: Rain

Jan 30, 2008 20:12

Title: Rain
Author: fadedpresence
Fandom: Twilight
Characters/Pairing: Edward/Bella
Prompt: Rain
Rating: G
Word Count: 540 approx
Summary: She can't stop thinking about him. Not even when he's gone.
Note: Written for twilightprompts. Set during New Moon.

( For a moment it feels like the world has stopped… )

twilight: edward/bella, twilight: all, media: fanfiction

Comments 17

neverknew_xo January 31 2008, 03:04:58 UTC

Awww amazing! I wanted his voice to be real in the book too I was disapointed when it wasn't. This was beautiful and I have to say my favorite first half of New Moon was when Edwards voice was playing in her head! Great story! Lovely writing!

fadedpresence January 31 2008, 10:27:00 UTC

:D Thank you!
I know, same here *sigh*

ohxlucia February 4 2008, 03:11:14 UTC

This is so heartbreakingly beautiful. I love it <3

fadedpresence February 4 2008, 03:50:54 UTC

Thank you so much :D

runwayrose May 29 2008, 02:03:48 UTC

i cant believe i never commented this. i love it, and i'd read it before.
its so heartbreaking and so pretty.
i love how you spoke of the feel of the rain on her.
thnks for writing!

fadedpresence July 4 2008, 13:19:30 UTC

Sorry for the late reply, I'm only getting the time to go through comments now :D

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment!