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Fic: Staggering

Jul 14, 2008 23:45

Title: Staggering
Author: fadedpresence
Fandom: Twilight
Characters/Pairing: Jasper/Angela
Rating: G
Word Count: 300 words
Summary: Short and sweet. Angela and Jasper at Bella's graduation party.
Notes: Hasn't been beta'd, so I hope it's okay :)

( She’s very good at composing herself, but inside, she’s a catastrophe. )

twilight: angela/jasper, twilight: all, media: fanfiction

Comments 10

yoursolace July 14 2008, 17:35:13 UTC

The feelings inside her soar, a bird given to flight, when he looks at her. Little darts, innocent darts, of hope and fear and surprise.

you've made me adore this pairing. i absolutely love them because of your fics.

also *nudge* you could promote these fics over at twiriginal!

fadedpresence July 14 2008, 17:46:32 UTC

*SQUEE* I'm so glad I could convert you ;)

:D I shall do so right away! ♥

Thank you for the lovely comment :D

dtrumps July 14 2008, 18:51:44 UTC

oh, lovely
i can totally see this

fadedpresence July 15 2008, 03:35:42 UTC

Heeh :D Thank you so much.
Love your icon!

malva_lv July 20 2008, 23:28:06 UTC

Oh, this is absolutely lovely. Loved the mood in this very much and am glad to see that you've written something more for Jasper/Angela. :)

fadedpresence July 21 2008, 11:28:25 UTC

Thank you so much for your lovely comment :D

hazy_crazy July 24 2008, 09:22:33 UTC

You write so beautifully, I'm in awe! This was so gorgeous :)

fadedpresence July 24 2008, 09:24:12 UTC

<3 AWW! Thank you, Jess! ♥

dayari July 29 2008, 16:57:34 UTC

Y-YOU WROTE MORE FOR THEM. Oh my God. I think I might love you. I adore your Jasper/Angela fics! I only read "An Explodable Locker" and "The Same Person Four Times," but now I come back to this journal and I find even more fics about them!

This day has just turned to awesomeness.

I love the switching point of view here, you managed to capture both of them so perfectly... just great! ♥ *mems*