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Fic: What Makes It Dangerous #1

Jul 26, 2008 15:13

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twilight: angela/ben, chapters: what makes it dangerous, twilight: angela/jasper, twilight: all, media: fanfiction

Comments 33

roonilwazl1b July 26 2008, 05:58:22 UTC

no motivation needed. really, you're an very good writer, and you should definitely continue it. anything to do with Jasper, i will read (well..mostly anything.)

fadedpresence July 26 2008, 06:03:59 UTC

awww, thank you! ♥ i'm glad you liked it! HAHA i will read mostly anything with jasper, too...

roonilwazl1b July 26 2008, 06:15:43 UTC

apparently we share some similarities with Ang when it comes to attraction :P

fadedpresence July 26 2008, 06:17:26 UTC

:P who could blame her!

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whomever July 26 2008, 06:40:28 UTC

I think you're the person who made me ship Jasper/Angela, of which there is so little. I'm very excited to know where this is going. Though... I don't mean any disrespect when I say this, but it sort of bothers me that your fake cut leads straight to a commenting page. It seems a bit forceful and rude to me. I'm sure that's not what you're trying to do! I do know that. It's just the way it feels and like I said, sort of bothers me.

fadedpresence July 26 2008, 07:00:23 UTC

Thank you! ♥ Your comment means a lot.

As for the part about the commenting page, it's not meant to be forceful in any shape or form. I'm sorry you feel that way. I usually don't lead the cuts to the reply mode, but lately I've noticed a lot of fic writers doing so and thought I should jump on the bandwagon. It usually leans to more feedback, and with this particular fic, I feel I need it more than others.

If it's really that offensive, I'll change it?

slantedsunlight July 26 2008, 15:38:28 UTC

I really enjoyed this and I'd love to read more! Angela's perspective is really interesting- you've got her voice down pretty well- and this is a pairing I don't think I've ever considered, but I like already. :)

fadedpresence July 27 2008, 00:10:43 UTC

Thank you so much :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Your icon also makes me lol :D!

slantedsunlight July 27 2008, 05:23:45 UTC

haha, thanks! me too!

_starcatcher_ July 27 2008, 01:33:27 UTC

I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see the next one!! I like that we get to read about Angela's family, and get to see what it's like for her. And the part with Jess's aunt and her steamy novels made me laugh lol.

fadedpresence July 27 2008, 02:04:18 UTC

I'm really glad that you liked it! It's been fun for me to write, too! Especially fleshing out Angela's family, her relationship with Ben, etc.

I loved writing the memories from the photographs, especially about Jess's aunt :D

creamiiicandy July 27 2008, 02:24:09 UTC

havent read it yet, but I was so excited when I saw this!!
I adore all your jasper/angela fanfics YAYAYAYAYAYAY

creamiiicandy July 27 2008, 02:38:09 UTC

read it.
please continue this <3
I WOULD LOVE LOVE for you to.
the story is so really good so far.
I've always wondered how jasper/angela would be, and your fanfics
just made them seem more and more likeable :D

fadedpresence July 27 2008, 02:46:40 UTC

:D Aww, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it and would like to see it continued :D