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Fic: Sundays

Jul 31, 2008 03:05

Title: Sundays
Author: fadedpresence
Fandom: Twilight
Characters/Pairing: Rosalie Hale
Prompt: Sundays
Rating: G
Word Count: 287 words
Notes: A request for simply-strange ♥

( Sundays were always deliciously vacant. )

twilight: rosalie hale, twilight: all, media: fanfiction

Comments 12

nyaza July 30 2008, 17:24:26 UTC

owww. that is sad, and pretty, but sad. I just realized there's not much about Rosalie being human, which is silly, cause it what she cherish the most, her human life.

She would take breakfast around nine, a late start for her, and clear a spot on the small booth by the window. People making visits and house calls would walk by the Hale home, some oblivious and some entirely too curious of the pretty blond who posed behind the plate glass.
this sentences were so simply LOVE. I could picture them, so match, which is weird cause it's always hard for me to picture thing, and this, it was so clear on my mind.

I'm being spoiled today, but reading such pretty things.

fadedpresence July 30 2008, 17:27:27 UTC

thank you! you flatter me with your nice comments! haha!! ♥

i know :( i wish we had more about her, just her and not just about her flings with edward.

nyaza July 30 2008, 17:31:44 UTC

you deserve them. <3.

i kind of like the idea, of knowing more about her. I'm not much of Rose/Edward, but it could be interesting to read more about her, her human life, her changing, besides, Rosalie it's a pretty selfsih character, so, it should be everything *for* her. hehe.

finalday July 30 2008, 17:43:54 UTC

This was sooo cute! Great job bb! =D

fadedpresence July 30 2008, 17:47:55 UTC

<3 TY BB. Love your icon XD

finalday July 30 2008, 17:49:38 UTC

LOL! TY TY! XD

solimena July 30 2008, 19:56:28 UTC

ohh very very nice. this was great!!

fadedpresence July 31 2008, 01:23:37 UTC

:D Thank you!

kissingdaylight July 30 2008, 20:26:20 UTC

Like friends-turned-enemies, the sun and Rosalie pretend they never met.

Poor Rosalie. This is lovely, darlin.

fadedpresence July 31 2008, 01:23:47 UTC

♥ Thank you!

simply_strange August 2 2008, 22:47:37 UTC

Ahh thank you so much for this. I love your ability to go deep and explore the details of how she went about everyday as a human. It's all kinds of perfect - the first line was gorgeous gorgeous enough, and the rest of the piece made it all the more better. ♥

fadedpresence August 4 2008, 16:24:35 UTC

♥ AW! I'm so glad you read it. I was wondering if you'd seen I'd posted it or not.

And I'm so very glad you liked it *hugs*