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Fic: The Only Proof She Needs

Aug 08, 2008 02:24

Title: The Only Proof She Needs
Author: fadedpresence
Fandom: Twilight
Characters/Pairing: Jasper/Angela
Prompt: Clouds
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,152 words
Notes: A request for _starcatcher_. I hope you don't mind how far I strayed from the prompt! There's a little tiny piece concerning Jasper that I took from Breaking Dawn, but nothing that will spoil anyone. ( Read more... )

twilight: angela/jasper, twilight: all, media: fanfiction

Comments 11

nyaza August 7 2008, 16:55:37 UTC

OHHHHHH. This was... It was so calm, and yet so pretty. And I love to think Angela would be exactly like this, like you describe her. wodnerful. <3. I loved the scars part, it was... ¿real?.

fadedpresence August 8 2008, 10:11:47 UTC

♥ :D Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

creamiiicandy August 8 2008, 00:24:45 UTC

need I say more..? another fantastic angela/Jasper fic, I really really enjoyed it!!
thankyou once again
But I have a question though
In this fic, what exactley are Angela And jasper to eachother?
are they dating..friends..just happened to meet in the forest :D?

fadedpresence August 8 2008, 10:14:14 UTC

♥ Thank you so much! I'm glad you did!

I suppose that's open to interpretation, since I didn't mention Alice or anything! I didn't have any set idea, although I did want it to be a version of Angela that had been just recently introduced to the vampire world and the Cullens. How did you interpret their relationship? I'm curious to know :)

creamiiicandy August 9 2008, 09:50:26 UTC

well it sounds like they know each other quite well..
I'm going make a wild intepretation and say that I think (or more like I hope :D) that they have been together for some time now, and have developed feelings already..and Angela really wants to take the relationship further but Jasper is struggling with this idea. hehehehe

_starcatcher_ August 8 2008, 03:30:47 UTC

♥♥

Thank you!!! :]]

I loved it! I'm so happy you wrote it. It was great! You just write them so perfectly!
The scars part was my favorite.
And this too .God, she’s smarter than he is. His lips, previously pressed into a hard line, soften and he takes in a new breath. :D

[And it's okay you strayed, I was actually going to go back and change my prompt, but I forgot :)]

fadedpresence August 8 2008, 10:15:30 UTC

♥

I'm so glad you liked it :D Eeeh, I'm so glad you don't mind about the prompt! I really enjoyed thinking about how Angela (a perceptive girl!) would see the scars. She noticed them right away, whereas Bella had no idea until her attention had to be focused on them in Eclipse!

hazy_crazy August 8 2008, 03:54:10 UTC

Ooooh I loved this, Britt! :D I love the way you write Angela, and Jasper, too. And nothing wrong with deviating from prompts - as I told you last night :P

I love this line:
“The only proof I need is the color of your eyes.”

And omg, J. Jenks :O LMFAO I think I was spoiled haha! XDD

hazy_crazy August 8 2008, 03:55:11 UTC

Although, I re-read it, and maybe I wasn't that spoiled. I just know his profession lol, and that he was afraid of Jasper LOLOLOL

fadedpresence August 8 2008, 10:16:32 UTC

♥ Aw, thanks Jess!!! :D Angela/Jasper FTW!!!

:D J JENKS! LMFAO! You scared me for a moment, I thought OMG I SPOILED YOU :O! But I'm glad/hope that's not the case!

lighting September 25 2008, 04:05:47 UTC

Amazing, as always, Britt. I just... can't express to you enough how much I love the way you write this pairing. Your writing (especially your Jasper/Alice fics) both inspire and discourage me from trying, lmao. Inspire, because you've developed the best uncanon couple since Jasper/Bella, imo. ;) And discourage, because I know I would never be happy with the way I write them, because I love the way you write them way too much.

So, keep writing them so I don't have to hurt myself trying? ;D ♥