proof! that bandslash has NOT eaten my brain (but George Clooney might have)

Aug 12, 2007 13:20

Johnny Appleseed (Or 5 Ways Rusty and Danny Might Have Met), approx. 4900 words.

Yes, I wrote Ocean's 11 fic. Because George Clooney is, apparently, a zombie.  Massive thanks to
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ocean's movies, fic:ocean's, george clooney

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catwalksalone August 12 2007, 21:42:22 UTC
Girl, you have a serious way with words. Sparse and lyrical with beautiful imagery. I would have killed to write like this when I was your age. In fact, I wouldn't mind writing like this now (always with the too many words, me).

Not enough people see your stuff. Find a comm/site to post this to because it shouldn't be hidden away.

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thehousekeeper August 12 2007, 23:15:36 UTC
*blushes* Thank you! That means an awful lot. And I'm always concerned I'm too wordy (only partly because my English teacher tells me so on my marked essays). So I'm glad this turned out alright! I do owe a lot of that to lordessrenegade, though, because her beta-ing really helped.

Thanks. I found one! oceanfic. Yay!

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gairid August 12 2007, 23:22:02 UTC
I can't make up my mind which vignette I liked best because they're all so plausable and well written---you've got the voices down pat. Great stuff!

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thehousekeeper August 12 2007, 23:33:29 UTC
Thanks very much! That makes me really happy. Glad you enjoyed them all so much!

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thehousekeeper August 13 2007, 02:21:34 UTC
Thanks! Warm and happy is good - excellent, I'd say. Glad you enjoyed it!

And yes, lordessrenegade rocks on every level.

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charone August 14 2007, 04:56:03 UTC
You do have their voices down. You also have the certain sexiness that both men carry, down as well.

I am looking forward to reading more from you. :+)

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thehousekeeper August 14 2007, 17:40:38 UTC
Thank you! They certainly do have that je ne sais quois of sexiness. Seriously, I could stare at them for hours.

Um, right.

Thanks a lot! I'm looking forward to writing more.

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ignazwisdom August 20 2007, 01:55:30 UTC
Oh, I really loved this. Fabulous and sexy and believable, each and every one of them.

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thehousekeeper August 20 2007, 23:23:30 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad.

Well, to be honest, the sexy part's not all that difficult. *g* I mean, look at them!

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