Girl, you have a serious way with words. Sparse and lyrical with beautiful imagery. I would have killed to write like this when I was your age. In fact, I wouldn't mind writing like this now (always with the too many words, me).
Not enough people see your stuff. Find a comm/site to post this to because it shouldn't be hidden away.
*blushes* Thank you! That means an awful lot. And I'm always concerned I'm too wordy (only partly because my English teacher tells me so on my marked essays). So I'm glad this turned out alright! I do owe a lot of that to lordessrenegade, though, because her beta-ing really helped.
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Not enough people see your stuff. Find a comm/site to post this to because it shouldn't be hidden away.
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Thanks. I found one! oceanfic. Yay!
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And yes, lordessrenegade rocks on every level.
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I am looking forward to reading more from you. :+)
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Um, right.
Thanks a lot! I'm looking forward to writing more.
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Well, to be honest, the sexy part's not all that difficult. *g* I mean, look at them!
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