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(FIC) Small World for The Community by Misterwalnut

Apr 10, 2007 20:00

For: their-white-day
By: misterwalnut
Title: Small World
Pairing: Power Trio (Tezuka/Fuji/Echizen)
Rating: R (PG-13 for most parts)
Summary: Fuji is attending the same university as Echizen, and Tezuka realizes it's a small world after all. Post-Seigaku.
Warnings: A dreadful mix of humour, mild angst, unrequited sexual tension, and minor OCs.
Disclaimer: It really isn’t mine ( Read more... )

rated: r, tezuka/fuji/ryoma, fic

Comments 19

inner_demons_ April 11 2007, 23:09:22 UTC

Aww! I loved it! The letters were wonderful.

Also: Echibrat xD Amazing.

Very well done <333

don_amoeba April 13 2007, 20:46:12 UTC

I never liked the trio but THIS IS SO MUCH LOVE. :D I am in love with Yuuta, and Fuji's "for Wasabi's sake" makes me laugh for odd reasons. I love the conversations, the nicknames (apart from Tezuka saying "Momo", I've always thought he's the "Momoshiro" kind, but Echibrat and Schmalzy Syuusuke are adorable! :D) and the ending match is THE MOST PERFECT THING.
Thank you so much for writing this. And I think I can safely guess who you are, secret admirer. ♥

misterwalnut April 15 2007, 21:15:25 UTC

Heh, oops. I've been reading too much MomoRyo fics lately, so the 'shiro' got cut off. Glad you like it.

reddwarfer April 15 2007, 05:42:45 UTC

I like the end, especially with Ryoma not getting Tezuka. ♥

fairiesgonenuts April 20 2007, 11:24:36 UTC

oh please do continue! i found the fic highly amusing and enjoyable. saa, who knows fuji and echizen would get along that well.. i like the bantering between them [though i never see them as a pairing. and so is tezuka and echibrat =p]. i also like the interaction between the fujis. i would love to see a sequel to this [hopefully an R-rated one, if not smutty, considering the dripping UST in this fic].

misterwalnut April 23 2007, 00:47:54 UTC

I'm working on some smutty bits, but understand that with my wretched inability to write anything remotely hot, it may take a while. DDx

animegoil April 22 2007, 21:32:16 UTC

LOL! This was interesting to read-- the email formats where funny (they were also strange?). And what an interesting love triangle, Ryoma and Fuji confused the heck out of me. It was like... they were really comfortable with each other (um, well, yeah, I guess as 'sleeping' buddies) but at the same time they clearly didn't get along. And yet hung out together a lot. O.o it was an interesting relationship, I enjoyed reading that. Poor Tezuka! I felt bad for the guy, he was just thrown into a figurative pit of lions, LOL! I was glad that he got to see Fuji's real (?) game and then realized his feelings and blah blah. I have to say that some parts felt a little undeveloped/incomplete. It may simply be that I like more elaboration, but while Tezuka obviously was attracted to Fuji, it was never shown as more than a slight, unconscious attraction. But then he went and kissed Fuji just out of nowhere. Dunno, to me it seemed a bit too ... spontaneous. And what -was- up with Fuji's game in the last part? Was he doing it on purpose, or was it ( ... )

misterwalnut April 23 2007, 00:54:11 UTC

Thanks for the crit! <3

Yeah, I heavily doubt Echizen and Fuji could have a 'normal' friendship (if they could manage one at all). They bicker almost constantly because of their rivalry back in Seigaku, and they're just too competitive for Tezuka to be polite/kind/nice to eachother. And YES, I completely agree with the underdeveloped ending. I didn't have time to explore his thoughts and emotions and whatnot, and I hope the sequel will make up for it.

As for Fuji's game...who knows? :)

animegoil April 23 2007, 03:05:49 UTC

SEQUEL! Yes! I would love that, because really, you go into a lot of detail in the beginning, and I was like... hm... we NEED TEH SEQUEL for teh explanations! lol.