[One-Shot] A YamadaRyosuke/Shida Mirai OneShot: Unrequited

Sep 18, 2010 19:23

Title: Unrequited
Author: theivorykeys
Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP
Pairing: main: YamadaRyosuke/Shida Mirai sub: NakaShii
Genre: Romance, Angst
Rating: PG-13 
Warning: Involves cutting. Not described. 
Disclaimer: I own YamadaRyosuke and nothing save for the plot
Type: OneShot
Notes: Inspired by TaeYang's Wedding Dress. I'm not sure if it's angsty ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, subject: hey! say! jump, subject: yamada ryosuke, type: one-shot, pairing: yamada/oc, fanfic: unrequited, author: t

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emerald_love_96 September 18 2010, 12:21:41 UTC
whoa~~
you are so good in expressing Yama's feeling o_o
noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!
he cut himself DX
but at the end he is happy~ ;)
nice story :D

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theivorykeys September 18 2010, 12:30:19 UTC
Thank you. (: It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
I did this in about an hour and a half today so, yeah.

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theivorykeys September 19 2010, 02:47:48 UTC
Thankyouthankyouthankyou sooooooo much.
Your comment really made me happy too. (:
I was hoping to make people cry with this.

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crescentharpe September 18 2010, 14:06:28 UTC
jgkdfjgklsdfj

THIS FREAKING HURTS MY YAMASHI HEART. YAMADA!!!!!!! ;W;

oh well this is expected when your prompt is "Wedding Dress"...

Three years of trying to forget her. Not working. Why do I even try?

first major ouch. 3 years?! D:

I didn't even get to celebrate my birthday because I was sooooooo busy preparing for hers with him. And it hurts that neither of them remembered that it was my birthday. One day before hers.

HOW ON EARTH COULD NAKASHI COMMIT THIS BLUNDER?! /is hurting LOL

They had fed each other cake and kissed the cream off. While I sat there and forced the smile onto my face.

OUCH...b-but I squealed /shot

Turns out, she couldn't get him to go with her as she was busy and turned to me instead.

SHIDA! why is Yamada the rebound? DX

He called me today. He told me how he was still in love with Mirai and asked me what to do to get back with her. He wanted to propose to her. As a best friend, I could not ignore him and I told him what I would have done if I were in his shoes.
U-UNBELIEVABLE...Yamada...idk anymore ( ... )

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crescentharpe September 18 2010, 14:07:54 UTC
*i mean MAKE A HAPPY YAMASHI AS WELL orz

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theivorykeys September 19 2010, 02:54:27 UTC
Thankyou soooo much. Your comment just made my day even more perfect. I've always wanted to comment like this where points out specific parts in the fic. /shot

Suicidal Yama was a spur of the moment thing. I didn't even expect to write it but as the fic went, it just seemed angsty enough. Gomen, ne.

It was written for Fritz-kun. He asked for an angsty YamaShii so ta-da. I usually don't write YamaShii. ;p I'll try to make a happy one though. I just need a good prompt. (:

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crescentharpe September 19 2010, 04:24:10 UTC
LOL i thought it was unnecessary to quote over and over again but I'm glad we share the same thoughts over the long comments :D

no it's alright. I guess the suicidal thing added a lot to the pains that a reader would acquire by reading this.

ahehe I think Kuya Fritz would be satisfied by the overwhelming amounts of angst in here. :D YAY WRITE ONE WHEN YOU DO, OKAY? XD

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endrizka September 18 2010, 15:14:09 UTC
so sad....bit this was very well written :)

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theivorykeys September 19 2010, 02:55:40 UTC
Thankyou soooo much. I really appreciate it. (:

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endrizka September 19 2010, 04:41:24 UTC
^^

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sumi721 September 18 2010, 15:18:09 UTC
That was sooo sad T_T
But sooo good! :)
I'm so confused on what to feel... xD
That was a really good story!

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theivorykeys September 19 2010, 02:56:28 UTC
Thankyou sooooo much. I really appreciate it. (:
Just feeeeeel. ;p

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