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A Forbidden Rhapsody: Chapter 5: Allies and Guardians

Aug 30, 2010 20:13

This is specially for ryoma_nakamada and yelrihs_jefan who cannot stop bugging me to complete it. Thank you. I love. (:

Title: A Forbidden Rhapsody: Chapter 5
Chapter Title: Allies and Guardians
Author: theivorykeys
Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP
Pairing: NakajimaYutoxOC
Genre: Romance, Fantasy, Suspense, Adventure
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own Yuto and nothing save for the plot ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: yuto/oc, type: chaptered, subject: nakajima yuto, fanfic: a forbidden rhapsody, author: t

Comments 11

ryoma_nakamada August 30 2010, 14:10:50 UTC

EFFIN SPOT! WILL REPLY WHEN READ AND ABLE TO. LOLS

theivorykeys August 30 2010, 14:48:46 UTC

Awaiting (:

ryoma_nakamada September 1 2010, 11:46:28 UTC

THIS IS AWESOMESAUCE WOMAN! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I liked the history of the Elementals and the Guardians. LOL.

and i was thinking it would be Yuto/Kaori-chan who'd be the pair but LOL.

ME WANT MORE!!! :))

btw, i think it should be ALLIES :)

theivorykeys September 1 2010, 11:58:49 UTC

The history was the craziest part to come up with. ;p
Nah, Kaori-chan's much older than Yuto. ;p
P.S. Yusuke and Kaori are much older. They're like adults. Not mentioned but yeah.
Now that you mention it and after I checked my dictionary, yeah, allies. /runs to change.

luvdaisuke August 30 2010, 19:28:06 UTC

Erm.. SECOND! 8D *goes off to read* XDXDXD

luvdaisuke August 30 2010, 20:15:23 UTC

LMAOOOO OMGGGG

I lovee it!! It's soo well written~ <3<3<3

And the ending was EPIC WIN HAHA XD

But when Yuto staring with a "lovesick expression" D:

NEUU MUST BE WITH MURAKAMII XDXDXD

theivorykeys August 31 2010, 03:24:57 UTC

Thankyou. I feeell so loved. (:
NUUUUU! We'll see in /insert epic music
THE NEXT CHAPTER!

luvdaisuke August 31 2010, 06:54:39 UTC

No problem~ :3

A;SDLJKGH;AKJSDHG;KJASDGH NEXT CHAPTERR!! D:

yelrihs_jefan August 31 2010, 05:04:35 UTC

WHAT?!?!?! I'M NOT FIRST???
Dammit... that aside,
OMGOMGOMGOMG U UPDATED!!
*goes off to read* /whacked

yelrihs_jefan August 31 2010, 05:47:04 UTC

Wow, this was an AWESOME chapter!!
It's amazing how you can keep up the suspense throughout the whole chapter...
and I LOLed at the last part...
and someone's getting a lil jealous... hehehe

theivorykeys August 31 2010, 11:16:04 UTC

Thankyou. I appreciate it.
And you can also thank my virus-fied computer for not allowing me to access the Internet which gives me more time to concentrate on writing this. (: