A Taste

Jan 22, 2008 20:12

Of something to come. This is the first part of a short story I'm writing. I promise to post the rest when I finish it.
The ascent of the sun to the point that its rays can be seen peeking through the grime caked over the windows of the house does not signal her awakening. She has been awake for a very long time already. She has moved in the ( Read more... )

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prisner_of_2day January 23 2008, 21:35:42 UTC
So I felt sorrow for the woman, but not anymore. If Kelly reads this she will have a fit haha. But as always, it was very nicely done Jake.

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thejakechord January 23 2008, 23:07:29 UTC
Sweet! I was definitely trying not to show my hand, so it's good that you felt something towards the old lady that wasn't just repulsion right off the bat.

Yeah, it was gonna be a bird at first but then I thought of Kelly's potential expression of dismay and I had to change it.

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prisner_of_2day January 23 2008, 23:39:32 UTC
I applaud your change of animal.

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