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The Raging Fury, Part Two - RPS - A "The Jealous Sea" Story, NC-17

Aug 29, 2009 12:45

Fandom: RPS
Title: The Raging Fury (a thejealoussea story), Part Two ( Read more... )

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darling_lisa August 30 2009, 00:53:15 UTC

"You are very pretty when you cry for me. I shall have to make you cry more often."

No lie, this line gave me shivers. Partly in anticipation, partly in dread *grin* but wonderful both ways.

ladykatiewench August 30 2009, 04:01:52 UTC

"You are very pretty when you cry for me. I shall have to make you cry more often."

*shudders* Ooooh...that made me happy in my happy spots.

havenward August 31 2009, 19:55:49 UTC

:whimpers:

canadiangoddess July 3 2010, 00:50:25 UTC

Wow. Darkness, villany, desperation, all overlaid with the smell of saltwater, blood and semen.

Even though I am braced for impact...I couldn't help loving this just a little.

ladywinchester July 7 2010, 07:23:49 UTC

O.o If there are words... I don't know what they are. Damn woman... Just... Damn.