Comments | thejealoussea: The Raging Fury, Part Three- RPS

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The Raging Fury, Part Three- RPS - A "The Jealous Sea" Story, NC-17

Aug 31, 2009 16:18

Fandom: RPS
Title: The Raging Fury (a thejealoussea story), Part Three ( Read more... )

Comments 9

darling_lisa August 31 2009, 23:42:49 UTC

I know you warned about this... but... He is caught in a net that he will never escape. And Maia. Oh gods. *weeps*

ravensword September 1 2009, 12:46:45 UTC

It only gets worse from here...and yes, he's only going to feel that net tighten around him now. Poor boy. Poor Maia.

havenward August 31 2009, 23:51:45 UTC

Oh. Just. There's no words, it's just... so broken and sad and...

Crying and I love you for it. Dammit.

ravensword September 1 2009, 12:47:31 UTC

Kleenex warning to lead the next chapter...

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ravensword September 1 2009, 12:47:55 UTC

*nods*

I mean my warnings. *nods more*

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ravensword September 1 2009, 12:49:43 UTC

Does he? Are you sure that he loves her? Maybe he only loves the idea that she belongs to him.

Maybe it was inevitable, living through that kind of abuse, that he would turn it on those around him.

badfalcon September 1 2009, 16:26:13 UTC

*flails wordlessly*