Newport Beach Police Department, Chapter 10

[thekiller00]

A few days had passed since Summer showed up and Ryan realized how different his life could be if he didn't live alone. His morning routine changed from going on morning jogs to making sure that Marissa and Megan were alright and they had something to eat, before talking to the officers guarding the house, then going on his morning jog. By the time

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blake robinson

[unknownarts]

use some other name!

Re: blake robinson

[thekiller00]

Give me a reason.

Besides, I just came up with a random name after looking in a phone book and it doesn't mean I have anything against anyone, because I don't.

Re: blake robinson

[unknownarts]

Because my name is Blake Robinson and having that name in a story makes me feel awkward. Plus it's not a really good story name.

Re: blake robinson

[thekiller00]

It is no big deal. Besides, his role in this fic is almost over any way.

So no, I am not going to change the name this far into the fic. Feel free to read my fics, but I am not going to be changing anyones names unless it is something big and that is not meant to be mean to you in any way.

So again, sorry. But the name is staying as is and if you still feel that you don't like it, you do not have to read it.

[moonspell4]

Good post.
Just do some proof reading, i noticed that there were some "minor mistakes".