Newport Beach Police Department, Chapter 12

Oct 08, 2007 02:32


A/N: Many thanks to my new beta, xsweetnightmare. This is one of the main posts of this fic, but it is short and you will find out at the end. I hope everyone likes it.
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The next day, Ryan had just walked into the house and was taking off his button up shirt and began to take off ( Read more... )

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moonspell4 October 8 2007, 22:32:39 UTC
At the end its Marcus...

Theres one thing i would have done till now that u don't seem to have touched, who is Leslie, how does Ryan interact with her, stuff like that i think it would have make Marissa's outburst do a lot more sense

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