Vertigo by theladychia

May 08, 2006 14:27

Title: Vertigo
Author: theladychia
Warning: Homosexuality. Untalented author.
Disclaimer: Based on the characters of the First Class Ticket to Nowhere saga by dadomz and i_l0ve_my_az.

Notes:
1. I shift tenses.
2. This takes place before dadomz's To Right a Wrong and i_l0ve_my_az's A Drink to Keep the Ghosts at Bay.
3. Comment and tell me what you think!
4. Enjoy!


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mechmushroom May 9 2006, 08:38:09 UTC
.......<<<>>>

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theladychia May 9 2006, 11:48:14 UTC
...what?

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mechmushroom May 10 2006, 08:29:57 UTC
what? want a real comment???

my kid is such an idiot....wonder where he gets it from??????....

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theladychia May 10 2006, 13:28:31 UTC
Of course I want a real comment! Do you know how hard I tried to get this out of me?! I'm not like the rest of you who can write really well, damn it!

::growl::

But thanks for the comment. Though I wish you'd say something about the way I write instead but hey you're kid ain't stupid. He just be all confused. It's my kid's fault for being such an emotional fag. XD

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kamottle May 10 2006, 14:01:38 UTC
I really really like this.

there was indeed a familiar ache on his backside and along his thighs.

ahahahahaha. nice.

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theladychia May 10 2006, 14:10:28 UTC
haha rawr.

weird though. i hate that line the most. XD next to the he and zeke weren't even together shit. XD

thanks for reading and commenting, love snot! <3 ::sex::

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clarz_yen May 13 2006, 14:37:39 UTC
but Juice arrived, crashing through the door and landing in a drunken heap inside the apartment. fuck! that's what you said about my kid being in it?!

*sigh*

oh well anyways kinda weird thinkin bout mech's kid any dada's in that way...totally weird.

just...ew

like domz said the story aint our kids they're just our personality played by our kids and...shit dada and mech hehehe no offense dada or mech luv u both u know that but bot weird lang tee hee leave me alone my brains weird that way :P

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theladychia May 14 2006, 06:11:33 UTC
uhm...Clarz...Cy is MY kid...

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i_l0ve_my_az May 14 2006, 14:18:31 UTC
Oh, Clarz...

Words cannot begin to express my love for you. Dada/Mech??? Ew. Please, that be like two amoebas slushing up against each other in a watch glass.

Also, since i be ol, Mech/Clarz!!!! to hell with you people, then i'd be subconsciously shipping Zeke/Juice or Zeke/Claude. XP

Oh Claude, I want to take you and Damien out shopping as little kids and dress you in cheongsams...

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theladychia May 14 2006, 15:20:43 UTC
Bati.a nimo oi!!!! You reply to clarz's and other people's comment in my posts but you never comment on my actual post!

Joke!

And nasty image of you and mech "slushing" up against each other. ::shudder::

We need lives.

::sigh::

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clarz_yen May 15 2006, 12:26:16 UTC
um sorry bout that hehehe :P limot ko :D my brains dead man gud :D

hahaha anyways "two amoebas slushing up against each other in a watch glass." ?ooookaaaayyyy...

and i do read all the drabbles bya but sumtimes gitapol lang jud ko u knw me :D sleep comes first b4 anything else :D hehe

Zeke and JUICE???? my brain thinking more az/juice since they're always together hehehe :D

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i_l0ve_my_az May 19 2006, 01:30:42 UTC
Az/Juice??? You are one extremely sick woman who subconsciously wants me so bad...Kidding...;P

Also, yes, that be me and mech and me and domz and me and mech and domz, if you ever paired us up together...

Mwah! I loff you. We should like so totally go shopping for like claude and damien together and like bring DOmz with ussince it's her dream.

And I will feed your kid excessive amounts of siopao...Hee

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mechmushroom May 19 2006, 07:42:40 UTC
siopao??????

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theladychia May 19 2006, 10:50:09 UTC
You know...Chinese people and sio pao...

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sabariel192 May 25 2006, 04:12:27 UTC

I loved how you had opened the story~bringing us right there to Cy's feeling.

Twas wonderful how it also unfolded from there, to another present and the events that led up to there! I could feel his pain, hell anyone would.

I found AZ to be understanding~~I liked how he comforted his fellow band memeber and I'm glad at the end it did not change their friendship.

“Need a lift?” Az asked, looking at him a little worriedly.

Cy shook his head and tried to smile. “Not the kind you mean.”

I know what you mean there, it makes me feel sad, Poor Cy to feel so bad. It was a truly beautiful piece,even if sad as well.

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theladychia May 25 2006, 10:10:22 UTC
If you're talking about the italicized text, that was supposed to be a summary but I stupidly forgot to put something in between that and the story. XD

Thank you so much for the review! Your opinion is of great value to me! You don't know how much. <33 ♥

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sabariel192 May 26 2006, 04:19:39 UTC
Hey, don't use that kind of adjectives! But for a mistake it has worked in really nicely! Leave it!

You don't have to thank me dear Chi. Don't forget that you do inspire me as well..okies mi querida~! <3<3<3

*More*

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