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theladyhel

A Man's Reach: Chapter Eight

Jun 12, 2009 22:16

Chapter Eight: The Morning After

We lay on the rug in front of the fire, limbs entangled, Jack half asleep, I with my face on his shoulder, not quite kissing it. I had done such things before, of course, with men and women. Although, not often with the latter, and not as often as all that with the former. I was tired, so tired, couldn’t remember not ( Read more... )

jack/james

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theladyhel June 15 2009, 19:16:01 UTC

Ta, la. I'll try and keep them consistently loveable.

orpsgod June 13 2009, 03:08:21 UTC

I am sooo glad you are continuing this! I look forward to more. :)

theladyhel June 15 2009, 19:18:27 UTC

^-^. Hooray! I'm- well, my aim is to have it finished by the end of summer, because of the limited amount of time for writing.

smithkingsley June 13 2009, 15:22:41 UTC

This is as lovely as everything that's come before! :-)

How adorable is that opening image?? *hearts* I really like James's train of thought, too; it feels like you've gotten into his mind. This is just PERFECT: The flames played shadows over us, too merry for my thoughts.

OMG, poor Jack. You aren't going to let more bad stuff happen to him, are you? I love James's 'you're not going anywhere'. <3

P.S.: Hope you have a lovely trip!

theladyhel June 15 2009, 19:29:45 UTC

Oh, I am glad! I was worried it got a little introspective. But I think I've kind of got an idea of where the whole thing's going now. Which is good. Also, I'm very glad the "you're not going anywhere bit" worked.
I'm sure I will- it sounds like it's going to be awesome. The first week we're working with PhD students, collecting data and stuff. And the second week we're going scuba diving.