The second part.

[theladyhel]

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When Lizzie told me that Gilt Arse himself had woken up, I told Gibbs to keep watching the horizon, and strode into my office. On seeing me Norrington stares a second and then starts shakin’ his head and laughin’ and mutterin’ “no, no, no. this is not happening… I did not do all that to end up back here” and such like,

Comments

[captain_bookcat]

oh yeah, this is fun. ^_^ poor James! and Teddy... :(

just wanted to point out the fact that this has quite a few typos/spelling issues. you should maybe read it over again, or do you have a beta?
I might be able to point out some stuff, seeing as I have next week off and therefore a large increase in spare time. :) Also, I'm sure someone else in the sparrington community would be able to refer you to a proper beta, if you need one...

otherwise, keep up the good work!!

[theladyhel]

yeas... I see whatcha mean. "wuite" *___* ---?
I'll go through it again- I posted this late last night while I was supposed to be watching a film....
I'm glad you like it thouh :)

Great story

[caldwellfan]

I"m really enjoying this. Can't wait for more.

Re: Great story

[theladyhel]

*HUG*
Ta!

[snarry_fan7]

Another amazing chapter! I like Norrington's conversation with Jack; most excellent work!!~Sophia

[theladyhel]

:) thankya!

[oo_wings_oo]

Good chapter, looking forward to reading the next part.

.:Wings:.

[theladyhel]

Ta. I'll post it as soon as I can.

[zakath_nath]

Very good story! I'm waiting for the third chapter!

And I like the Moonfleet's allusion.

[theladyhel]

*smiles* I live a way down the coast from the Fleet... and well, I couldn't resist.
(I really should read that book...)