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You Won't Be Mine (Chapter Eight)

May 26, 2008 22:20

Title: You Won't Be Mine (Chapter 8)
Author: thelastchickpea
Pairing: Spike/Angel, Bartleby/Loki (from Dogma), Spike/Bartleby
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: See AN. Slash (m/m sex), angst, crossover with Dogma
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, background story, or title. It's not for profit so please don't sue.
Spoilers: Post-NFA (so all AtS to be safe) ( Read more... )

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thelastchickpea May 27 2008, 20:11:19 UTC

I figured Loki would be the type :) Ooo, I hope you like Dogma; some people aren't really too fond of it (in fact, some people who are reading this fic I think) but I'm a big fan :)

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thelastchickpea May 27 2008, 20:17:40 UTC

Haha, yeah, they're all finally there!

D'Hoffryn was actually thanks to zoesmith, and I'm very glad you like his role in this.

I do want to give our poor boys a bit of loving soon! Teaser: Some comfort loving within the next two chapters, *looks at poor horny boys*, 1st smex probably about 3 or 4 chapters away?

*facepalm* Thank you for correcting that! I had kindof been thinking 'that saying doesn't make much sense' and now I know why :)

Thank you for the comment sweets!

adso_von_melk May 27 2008, 14:14:08 UTC

so exciting! can't to wait to know more! :)

thelastchickpea May 27 2008, 20:18:03 UTC

Thank you! More soon hopefully!

ex_dark_ami May 27 2008, 20:59:15 UTC

Oh this is interesting. Great update!

thelastchickpea May 28 2008, 02:03:09 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

zoesmith May 27 2008, 21:33:04 UTC

Mmmm Spike and Loki fighting…. It’s kinda HOT! ;) Very very good chapter honey. So many interesting things are happening. The plot really thickens! I love it.
I also loved very much caring Angel, running to his boy the moment he realised he was in danger. And it’s intriguing that he got a vision from the powers. I always wondered if it was indeed a one time thing.

And you used D’Hoffryn! This makes me very happy *gg*.

If you want me there, then I’ll always be there, Will.
Awwww *melts*

*kisses you*

thelastchickpea May 28 2008, 02:06:58 UTC

Haha, their fight went through ridiculous drafting; glad you liked it!

I figured maybe the Powers would be nice and give him a vision for something like this (especially since it might help them too)

D'Hoffryn was a great suggestion! And this actually works really well for something later :)

I knew he'd never say something like that out loud, but I figured maybe he could think something sweet like that.

*kisses back for awesome comment*