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thelastfig

Won't do me no good washing in the river (2/4)

May 25, 2012 01:14

Title Won't do me no good washing in the river- Part two New Orleans
Pairing Eventual David Silva/David Villa, Samir Nasri/Gael Clichy, Past David Silva/Adam Johnson, Alluded Karim Benzema/Yoann Gourcuff
Rating This part pg13
Word Count 5693
Disclaimer Not true
AN: Thank you to albion_lass for being amazing.

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joe hart, david villa, gonzalo higuain, zlatan ibrahimovic, mario balotelli, samir nasri, cesc fabregas, yoann gourcuff, rps, gael clichy, pepe reina, karim benzema, vincent kompany, david silva

Comments 8

jungle_moon May 26 2012, 08:07:10 UTC

Urghh...love this so much!!! And there will be only 3 parts??! And Silva is leaving when they haven't even started anything yet??! Well...David's heartfelt request to Silva IS a start, at least.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope they will be together, happily ever after!

thelastfig May 29 2012, 01:06:32 UTC

Yes, only three parts (last part might be really long... but that's not a bad thing, right?), but I might consider writing one shots in this verse later down the road.

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domster07 May 26 2012, 20:59:57 UTC

I am amazed at how invested I am in this fic. The cameos-Vincent, Gourcuff, Benzema-not an extraneuous character in the bunch. Samir/Gael, Silva/Villa-love how you capture their feelings for each other in their interactions, with not much being said.
And the ending, I can't even express how much that touched me. Looking forward to the last (!) part.

thelastfig May 29 2012, 01:08:15 UTC

:) I'm glad you liked the side characters. I had a little too much fun deciding who would be what.

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julialonso May 28 2012, 00:00:46 UTC

Damn gurl you're amazing! Have I ever said I am loving this fic? I'll say again I am loving! The way you write is just amazing. I feel their anguish. I can't wait for the next chapter!

thelastfig May 29 2012, 01:09:34 UTC

yay! I'm glad you're loving it. I wasn't sure when I started it what reactions would be (probably 'uh, what?' or 'lol no thanks'), but I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

thank you so much for commenting

elisa88 June 18 2012, 18:08:23 UTC

Oh wow, this is filled with so many strong and powerful feelings; love, and trust, and new discoveries.. *sigh* and now Silva has to go? Gah, I definitely hope he makes it back safely.
I loved the scene were they read together, it was so intimate and so telling of them, individually and as a 'them'.
I adore this story ♥

kfunk22 August 16 2012, 16:03:28 UTC

just wow. amazing. i love your cast, they're all so perfectly suited to the story.

and MARIO! son of the voodoo queen. gah! and this? this is the line i have been waiting to read about him:

Mario grins wildly and for a moment David believes in spirits and magic- he sees them both in Mario's smile.

thank you for that. [and i see your hints of wimblydon and kitier katba, too!]

what a beautiful story.