Born to be in a state of longing (born to be wanting)

[thelastfig]

Title Born to be in a state of longing (born to be wanting)
Pairings David Silva/Sergio Aguero, David Silva/David Villa, David Silva/Leo Messi, David Silva/James Milner, mentioned David Villa/Leo Messi and Sergio Aguero/Leo Messi
Rating NC-17
Word Count 9626
Disclaimer Not true
Summary A thought occurs to him that perhaps being someone's second or

Comments

[justkisa]

I'm trying to restrain myself, because mostly I want to, like jump up and down and like declare my undying love for you, but, um, you know, we don't know each other and that'd be super awkward and all, but seriously, YOU WROTE SILVA/MIlNER AND IT IS AMAZING! Just like, absolutely amazing.

I love your Silva, so moody and restless and so far from perfect, I kind of adore him and James is such a good foil for him, steady and smart and unwilling to be second or third choice and willing to wait for Silva to realize he doesn't want that either (and your James, also amazing, I'm in awe of you for figuring him out well enough to write him, boy is a total mystery to me). Just every scene they have together and their happy ending, they made me smile so, so much. I've been waiting and waiting for someone to write them and I love how you've written them together

[thelastfig]

Wow, what a lovely comment! I'm glad I captured James well enough to write him (hopefully half way decent) because I do think he's rather... well stoic I suppose. It was really a flip between putting him with Adam or James, but I thought it was time that James got some love.

Thank you for commenting

[thelastfig]

I wanted to write a foursome scene, but no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. I think it's because I have a problem writing Kun; I never feel like I can capture who he is. Perhaps someday in the future...

I am happy you enjoyed this and thank you for commenting

[alee_carax]

ok, i'll try to explain myself...

im not a citizen, i didn' know who was james milner, i don't like the kun/messi thing and i don't like the cheating theme (who likes it?) however, i just can't help loving this fic:)

it's so realistic, so human and idk, just fantastic.

great job<3

[thelastfig]

I understand what you're saying. Glad you liked it and thank you for leaving a comment.

[blaugranagram]

This is so, so lovely... Just beautiful. My heart broke for dear Silva, but you put it all right in the end. I love the idea of Silva not being the 'other man' and deserving better.

Well done. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story!

[thelastfig]

He seems to pull the best angst from people, doesn't he? Thank you so much for commenting <3

[greenpixiehair]

Uni is kicking my ass too much for me to read this right now, but this is my placeholder comment for the inevitable OH MY GOD OH MY GOD that shall occur when I do ♥

[thelastfig]

I look forward to it ;p

I hope Uni isn't kicking your ass too much right now <3