five. (dragged him down)

[thelasthouse]

his eyes are wide shut

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[breadforsong]

I love this. Especially the first and last stanza:
the wide world
full of heights and descents
<333

[thelasthouse]

<3 Thank you!

Also, I feel like kind of a dick whenever you comment here, because I read all of the stuff that you put up and I lovelovelove it but I never get around to saying so, and. I just feel like an utter dick, basically. I know I should comment, but I get to the page and I just end up sitting there and looking at it and loving it but never actually expressing my love. So. At some point I will have to go back through all of your stuff and I will try and comment on it, but for now I'll just settle for telling you that I think you are brilliant.

I'll stop gushing at you now.

[breadforsong]

well, I hardly comment on your writing often. But thank you. Your comments do mean a lot to me :)