The Lie Behind the Postcard - Dreams that come True

Aug 15, 2006 00:49



The ambulance arrived in less than ten minutes. The paramedics immediately brought out the First Aid kit, started trying to resuscitate the man who’s name they were told was, “Monroe”. After they felt he was stable enough for the ambulance, they pulled out the stretcher, loaded him in and sent him to the Riverton Memorial Hospital. He was ( Read more... )

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enjoyed it alot anonymous August 17 2006, 03:59:42 UTC
love that they found each other again

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Re: enjoyed it alot theliebeneathff August 21 2006, 19:58:52 UTC
I'm really glad knowing that you liked it!!!! Hope you like the next

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joetheone August 21 2006, 05:48:45 UTC
Thank you I had read most of this on FFiction.net and glad to find here on livejournal. I'm so happy that you wrote this chapter and the wait was well worth it. You certainly put a lot of hard work into this chapter and you helped us see a lot of issues. I started to feel bad for Alma and Lureen in this chapter even though all along I hated what they did I did feel bad for them. I'm glad you put a human face on them as well. Also the part with Jack realizing his Daddy may have been more accepting then we thought was great and of course the end with them giving the vows to each other and then honeymooning out in the fields was great. I will be looking forward to more. Oh one small thing, in the one chapter you had Dr. Jenkins and Dr. perkins I think you menat Jenkins again just a slight thing I noticed. Joe

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Thank you! theliebeneathff August 21 2006, 20:05:51 UTC
OMG Joe!!! I was missing you! I was missing your review on fanfiction.net I thought that I lost one of my favorite readers!!!! Glad to know that you are back!

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Re: Thank you! joetheone August 21 2006, 22:02:23 UTC
No I'm still around. I was on vacation for 3 1/2 weeks I took the laptop but found so much of real life kept me from reading. So just getting caught up with stories and I'm so addicted to your story thank you so much. Joe

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anonymous March 21 2009, 13:02:58 UTC
This was kinda hard to read (I'm from Sweden..) but I loved it! ;__;
it's so well written and emotional and all. well shit, I can't wait to see how this ends but at the same time I'm sad 'cause this has caused me so much joy and all.

But thank you for writing this ! *hug*

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anonymous August 5 2009, 05:32:19 UTC
Omg! You can't imagine how I love your fiction. You're just fckg amazing! That's the best fiction I read!I wanna thank you to wrote it and post it! I'm even translating the fiction in french for my young sister =O

If you wanna have it, just ask ^^

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