The Lie Behind the Postcard - A Love that will Never Grow Old (A)

Sep 18, 2006 19:27

Note: This chapter was too long, so I divided in two A Love that will Never Grow Old (A)and A Love that will Never Grow Old (B)I hope to post the second part soon

Ennis and Jack were still at Lightning flat on what they considered their “Honeymoon” . Their Sunrise Wedding had been about a week ago, and for them, their new life was more than a ( Read more... )

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joetheone September 19 2006, 03:04:37 UTC
Ok you have me all worried that the towns people are going to go after Ennis and take care of those queer boys on the Twist ranch. I did like the chapter and thought it was very well done and you captured alot. I'm glad that Jack started to tell Ennis about his past and well even though at first Ennis did not like hearing that Jack was not a virgin when they met I'm glad he changed his mind and let Jack apologize in such a wonderful way. Now, I'm worried about Bobby being so guilt ridden over his Mama but it is very understandable and I'm glad Jack still has forgiveness in his heart for his wife even though she did the most horrible thing possible he is correct in one way maybe they would still be doing fishing trips instead of actually trying to start alife together. thank you for update! Joe

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