The Lie Behind the Postcard - A Love that will Never Grow Old (B)

[theliebeneathff]

Here's the second part of the chapter, I hope you like it! comments are really appreciated!

Ennis was getting in the truck when he noticed a pay phone next to the store. His first thought was to call his daughters when he got back to the ranch, but then realized that was impossible because they didn’t have a phone

Comments

[joetheone]

Great update here, I'm so troubled over Alma and well I feel really badly for Monroe he is such a simpleton in this whole scheme of life of hers. She is really in need of some deep mental health counseling. I liked how the girls got so overly excited hearing from there new and improved Dad and all. Jack and Ennis I think will have a lot of these sort of things happening the insecurity of how life has treated them will take a long time to heal. Great work going with finding Mr. Humphrey's sister-in-law and all that was sweet and finally someone in this small town who may be on the side of Jack and Ennis. Joe

[cwby30]

HI!! Great story. Read the whole story, and hope I didn't miss the last chapter. Can you give me the link??!!

Based on your earlier writing, Alma does something drastic and does away with herself. What??!!! How???!!! Where???!!!

Need to know that Ennis and Jack made it through, that Alma missed on her next chance at them. They have some friends, and need to know that others can/will be on their side so they can have the life they desire and deserve.

Thanks again.

[theliebeneathff]

I'm glad to know you like it! Please stay tunned for the last chapter it will be a blast!!! Nothing than any other fics!

[theliebeneathff]

This is to let you know that I've posted the last chapter of my story hope to hear from you!

[anonymous]

Just read the whole of your story so far. I think its really good. I really want to know what Alma is planning.