Secondhand Destiny, 2/2

[theliningsilver]

For the first part of this two-part Neville-centric story, please click here!  This half mostly unbetaed.  Blame me for mistakes :)

Comments

[kaz814]

OMG so squee. OMG OMG OMG Yes.

:D

I LOVE this. More than words can say. Or at least more than I could. And the end? GUH. Nev is such a hottie. And again, GUH.

:D

[angelbelle516]

Squeeee~~~
you are amazing, neville is my hero.
you encompassed everything that is so him!!!\
perfect(except for the few spelling errors-lol(don't mind me I'm just anal))
me <3 you long time!!!!

[theliningsilver]

Argh... spelling errors? Please point them out so I can correct them. I'm anal about spelling myself-- the problem is, I never read back over my things, and my clumsy fingers are adjusting to the keyboard of a new laptop. Such tiny, flat keys!!!

In the meanwhile, I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. Neville is just... absolutely one of the most wonderful characters in canon. Thank you for reading.

[angelbelle516]

um, there were only two and I already forgot one, but its lEgilimency with an e not an I.
I never catch my own errors but i can so easily nitpick others writing

[leechwife_19]

that was so good. it was seriously one of the best neville fics i have read.

and the fact that you managed to squeeze a little d/g in there didn't hurt either.;)

[theliningsilver]

Aw... thank you so much for the compliment! :)

[isabela113]

I love Neville's forcefulness, the sort of grim power that he finds. I liked it because it wasn't 'put on' or out of character. He is just as damaged as Harry, in his own way, and he never expresses it, but if he did this might be the Neville we'd see. Great job.

[theliningsilver]

Thank you. I enjoyed writing it very much. *hugs Neville*

[absolut_jmo]

*pokes you* Why had you not told me this was up!?!?

I loved it dearly. You convey emotions so damn well. Will expound later when I'm not at work *guilty grin*