Bat swings and cracks against ball. Homerun. I did it!

Apr 26, 2005 22:05

Jack Largin was a small boy who had not much to look forward to. He came from a poor family full of drunkards and sluts. He wore a red baseball cap that attempted to mat down his unruly red hair. It curled like Shirley Temple and raged with colors like fire. The hair complimented a pale face with playful freckles. He was almost a poster child, but ( Read more... )

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_liar_ April 27 2005, 02:25:13 UTC
I like the ambiguity of the ending, I expected the poem to act as a mantra for killing his parents at first...so I'm pleasantly surprised.

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estu_k_aftadai April 27 2005, 19:18:36 UTC
Good stuff, I look forward to the next entry.

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anonymous April 30 2005, 01:19:29 UTC
i love you.

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