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Big Brother - Chapter Seven

Jan 09, 2013 20:17

Title: Big Brother
Chapter: 7/?
Author: thelonelycoast
Rating: PG-13 - R
Genre: Romance/Drama/Humor
Pairing: Harry Styles/Louis Tomlinson, Louis Tomlinson/Zayn Malik
Summary: When Fifteen year old Louis gets busted for shop-lifting, he's assigned fifty hours of community service as a mentor for a troubled twelve year old (Harry Styles). But if he thought he got ( Read more... )

Comments 5

bbeyourself January 10 2013, 21:20:11 UTC

this is great! II'm so glad your posting it in here too :) can't wait for more!

thelonelycoast January 11 2013, 21:30:30 UTC

Thanks so much. I don't really have a good idea of how many people are reading on livejournal, so I've been posting to AO3 more, but it's nice to know people are reading here too!

Thanks :)

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thelonelycoast January 11 2013, 21:31:06 UTC

Awww! I'm sorry. This fic is getting super angsty lol

Finally All Caught Up... chameleon_18 January 13 2013, 12:09:34 UTC

and the first thing that popped into my head was "Oh, what a tangled web we weave."

All that conflict Louis has in himself over what he feels for Zayn and Harry is going to get him in trouble eventually. Though, I love Louis' over-protectiveness of Harry and I find Louis' relationship with Zayn forced, but not at the same time.

I find the fact you've left us with a minor cliff-hanger a bit disturbing as I am looking forward to diving into another chapter. ;)

Well written, as always, this story has me on the edge of my seat, jonesing (sp?) for more.

tondada August 10 2013, 18:21:30 UTC

I <3 Louis! I love that he's standing up for Harry, even though it may eventually cause problems with him and Zayn.

Really addicted to this story!! Hoping for updates soon . . . :)