IshiHime- In the Sky with Diamonds

Nov 20, 2010 06:19

Aaah, finally, something Bleach again. The sheer amount of IshiHime in the last chapter was so adorkable, I had to whip something up. This diverges from canon in where Hime's hairpins have gone, and her relationship with Uryuu- I don't think they're quite at this stage yet. Key word being "yet". xD Hope you all enjoy! Oh, this also doubles as a ( Read more... )

:character- ishida uryuu, :character- orihime, :fandom- bleach

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thelovelyfool November 20 2010, 14:51:41 UTC
Aaaah, thank you! I'm a sucker for kiss scenes, especially when characters have no clue what they're doing. Stream-of-consciousness is a favourite style of mine, so I really like to try and capture the garbled-ness of thoughts in that situation- I'm glad it came across well!

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luminous85 November 20 2010, 23:58:42 UTC
This was unbelievably precious! I was holding my breathe for Ishida every time Inoue was in his presence(and away lol). I find it very sweet that he noticed about her hairpins before she said anything. I think she might have felt the same after realizing he was that observant on her behalf. You did a wonderful job displaying they're tenderness and potential character growth. I wish you luck in the contest.

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thelovelyfool November 21 2010, 05:18:46 UTC
Aaah, thanks! I wasn't expecting this degree of positive feedback, since I've been out of the Bleach writing loop for a while, so I'm glad they're recognizable as themselves. xD

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