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Day 5: Spaces Still Undone (original fiction)

Nov 07, 2011 00:55

LJ Idol Topic 3: Coprolite
Title and cut from Golden Skans by Klaxons
805 words

( Ruins, or relics, disciples and the young )

oc: kim, fic series: astro-twins, original fiction, lj idol, oc: mike, mini nanowrimo 11

Comments 36

slashxmistress November 6 2011, 16:22:14 UTC

Nice!!Of course she dragged him all the way out there for a bowl made of shit! Doesn't he know that's what archaeologists do?

This is lovely. Your sf is perfect. I read SF and Fantasy fic magazines all the time and honestly I feel like I could have read this there.

seratonation November 7 2011, 01:53:46 UTC

ahahahahaha, it just never seemed important to him, you know? He thought she was going to look for bones.

oh man thank you so much!

myrna_bird November 6 2011, 21:23:46 UTC

Mike and Kim had quite the adventure. Glad they stayed on good terms!

seratonation November 7 2011, 02:00:42 UTC

yeah :D I wanted to show that no matter what they go through, they'll always be there for each other.

majesticzaichik November 6 2011, 21:25:09 UTC

Cute story! I like how in the short amount of time you gave them an interesting background which proved to compliment the story later on.

seratonation November 7 2011, 02:02:54 UTC

oh man thank you so much! I was worried giving them too much back story would drag the story down, or away from the plot, so im glad you thought it worked :D

basric November 6 2011, 23:30:00 UTC

Very sweet. I enjoyed it, the dialog was crisp.

seratonation November 7 2011, 02:04:50 UTC

im glad you liked it, thank you so much!

noodledays November 7 2011, 00:11:10 UTC

it is interesting how different priorities and thought processes can be.

seratonation November 7 2011, 02:42:55 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting <3