Comments | themadwritings: Topic 10: Sticks and Stones

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Topic 10: Sticks and Stones

Jan 16, 2012 22:37

This machine can barely function
685 words | Astro-twins 'verse
Thanks to whipchick for the beta | Title and cut from Modern Fables by Julia Deans

( Under the weight of rocks and bones )

oc: kim, fic series: astro-twins, original fiction, lj idol, oc: mike

Comments 20

ecosopher January 16 2012, 13:23:30 UTC

Your characters have such warmth and depth to them. I really enjoyed this :)

seratonation January 17 2012, 10:35:08 UTC

omg thank you so much! Im really glad :D

sweeny_todd January 17 2012, 02:43:04 UTC

I really enjoy the characters here, and I want to know more - why are they kids being such bastards, where is Mike going, what happens to Kim etc etc. A sign of a job well done :-)

seratonation January 17 2012, 11:35:07 UTC

lol thank you! I'm very slowly building these guys up, if you follow the tags though, theres more of what happens in their future :)

jacq22 January 17 2012, 10:52:24 UTC

Yes where is Mike going... etc... You do inject warmth into your characters too, lovely.

seratonation January 17 2012, 11:41:07 UTC

University! Lol, lj idol has been a great opportunity to help me develop these guys :D

thank you so much for reading and the comment <3

shadowwolf13 January 17 2012, 20:59:28 UTC

I'd love to know more about them.

seratonation January 18 2012, 11:19:53 UTC

I love writing them, so hopefully there'll be more :D thanks for reading!

pixiebelle January 18 2012, 02:05:43 UTC

What a sweet brother. I could have used someone like him in middle school!

seratonation January 18 2012, 11:21:30 UTC

lol right? Mike's a sweetheart, im pretty fond of him :D thanks for reading and the comment!