LJ Idol Week 6: step on a crack

[seratonation]

Astro-Twins | Prequel to week 4 but both can stand alone | PG for swears

She was going to die. She saw Mike disappear into the distance, and she was going to die. Her heart was beating a million times a minute and she was going to die.

Comments

[jem0000000]

I'm glad they got away -- hopefully they find somewhere for her to rest soon.

[seratonation]

I have... plans. Not sure if they include rest though, we'll see :D

[itsjustc]

I enjoyed reading this. It's an exciting piece.

[seratonation]

I'm so glad! thank you!

[adoptedwriter]

This was fast-moving and held my attention. Nice! AW

[seratonation]

:D:D:D thank you so much!

[whipchick]

Lots of action!

[seratonation]

Yeah! It was kind of a struggle, I almost byed out, but I'm glad it came together (and that people are enjoying it!)

[favoritebean]

Ow!

Your piece was quite thrilling. I hope they get to a safe place, and she is able to heal.

[seratonation]

thank you so much!!