A question

[themonkeycabal]

(I was going to make this a poll, but that was just dumb, because if you wouldn't be interested, I wouldn't want to make you feel on the spot with some stupid ticky box, even though, obvs, you wouldn't have to fill out the poll, but still, it was stupid)Would anybody have any interest in reading a serialized action/adventure-y original story by me

Comments

[adafrog]

Oh man, sorry about missing the elephant.

I would definitely look at your serialized thingie. :D

[weaselchopsaw]

Read it for what? What-to-do-with-it suggestions? Very gentle and nurturing beta? Very thorough bloody-red-pen take-no-prisoners beta?

[themonkeycabal]

Well god knows it probably needs all of the above, but I was also thinking of putting it online as an "internet narrative presentation". My primary father had grand ideas of immersive text with, oh maps and drawings and newspaper-type articles and so on (I asked him for help putting together the website). I've not done any of that, however; it was getting a little overwhelming.

I can send you the rough of the first book, if you're really bored and stuff. I'm always grateful for your input.

[simplystars]

Is this the one from the journal??? Because if so then YES YES YES.

\o/

[arthurfrdent]

you missed the oli=phants, oi! that's a cryin' shame.

so is this story printed on napkins, with the requirement of getting them in order to be read? :verylevellook: of course I would read your story, no doubts there.