One Night Only (M)havelovedAugust 31 2011, 17:19:52 UTC
(This was written fairly quickly when my Internet was down last night; I'll probably expand and polish it a bit more later. Hope you like it! :D)
“What exactly did you say this was?” she asks, because, staring at the glass, all she can make out is that it’s green, and that it’s not anything she’s ever seen before.
“Midori,” he says, as if that explains everything, and when she drains the glass of it, she chokes.
“Tastes like piss, if you ask me.”
“I didn’t. I know.”
She watches his gait as he crosses the room. He doesn’t move quite as fluidly in the leather garments as she knows she does. She knows exactly what she looks like in this getup-the clinging leather, the curls. She knows he wouldn’t have hired her if he didn’t like exactly what he saw
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Re: One Night Only (M)zazie11August 31 2011, 18:37:57 UTC
AAHHHHH!!! This is AWESOME!!!
He doesn’t move quite as fluidly in the leather garments as she knows she does.
Yesss. Tell me more ...
"Bite me." I like this, but then you go and take it even further ...
“Is that why you went into your line of work, then? You like the biting?”
“Why’d you go into yours?” he fires back, his hands stroking along the curves of her thighs. “You like the fucking?”
“More than you know.” She licks his ear as she says it, and she hears a chuckle.
“I think I know.”
asfdljkj!
This bit is both incredibly funny (I think I literally slapped the table when I read, "You like the fucking?") but then swings right back to sexy with that chuckle and "I think I know." <333
Sexy-sexy-sexy, and then .... “I can give you a cream for that.” I swear Trai, I'm gonna wet my pants! The two professionals, swapping trade tips ... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
Peter searching out the taste of his own blood in her mouth, the egomaniac (bless him). ;D
“Oh, hell, get me drunk and I’ll try anything. Come on.”You take that line
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Re: One Night Only (M)havelovedAugust 31 2011, 20:05:38 UTC
Augh, don't you dare threaten me with taking out my internet! ;) Hurricane Irene hit my area hard, completely drowned my school's Internet servers since Sunday morning! We got service back for some brief shining hours yesterday (long enough for me to check up on things and check the prompts here!), shortly after I saw Fright Night with my Whovian friends (convenient, eh? :D), and I wrote as I whiled away the time!
Hee, I'm so glad you liked it! I had so much fun imagining the two of them together, and "You like the fucking?" was actually my favorite part of writing that whole encounter, too! And heh, all I could think of at first was Peter's line about the leather giving him a rash, and of course Belle would know what to do about that! On the ride home, one of my friends remarked that David sometimes didn't seem quite so comfortable moving in the leather, so I tried to play on that
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“What exactly did you say this was?” she asks, because, staring at the glass, all she can make out is that it’s green, and that it’s not anything she’s ever seen before.
“Midori,” he says, as if that explains everything, and when she drains the glass of it, she chokes.
“Tastes like piss, if you ask me.”
“I didn’t. I know.”
She watches his gait as he crosses the room. He doesn’t move quite as fluidly in the leather garments as she knows she does. She knows exactly what she looks like in this getup-the clinging leather, the curls. She knows he wouldn’t have hired her if he didn’t like exactly what he saw ( ... )
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He doesn’t move quite as fluidly in the leather garments as she knows she does.
Yesss. Tell me more ...
"Bite me."
I like this, but then you go and take it even further ...
“Is that why you went into your line of work, then? You like the biting?”
“Why’d you go into yours?” he fires back, his hands stroking along the curves of her thighs. “You like the fucking?”
“More than you know.” She licks his ear as she says it, and she hears a chuckle.
“I think I know.”
asfdljkj!
This bit is both incredibly funny (I think I literally slapped the table when I read, "You like the fucking?") but then swings right back to sexy with that chuckle and "I think I know." <333
Sexy-sexy-sexy, and then .... “I can give you a cream for that.”
I swear Trai, I'm gonna wet my pants! The two professionals, swapping trade tips ... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
Peter searching out the taste of his own blood in her mouth, the egomaniac (bless him). ;D
“Oh, hell, get me drunk and I’ll try anything. Come on.”You take that line ( ... )
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Hee, I'm so glad you liked it! I had so much fun imagining the two of them together, and "You like the fucking?" was actually my favorite part of writing that whole encounter, too! And heh, all I could think of at first was Peter's line about the leather giving him a rash, and of course Belle would know what to do about that! On the ride home, one of my friends remarked that David sometimes didn't seem quite so comfortable moving in the leather, so I tried to play on that ( ... )
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Glad you enjoyed it! :D
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