Never-ending 3/3

[tkross23]

Never-ending, Nine/Rose, Ten/Rose, rating Adult
Beta: develish1
Chapter 3, word count 1,692

Comments

[fogsblue]

This is a wonderful ending and well done on your first fic, and smut!! It's great :)

[tkross23]

Thank you so much! I was really worried about the smut and, honestly, I never thought I'd be able to write it. The story needed it though, I think (and it isn't that explicit).

[fannishliss]

I loved this! You did a really great job. I especially liked the way their love story spanned time, and how much she was attracted to Nine before ever getting up the nerve to act on it with Ten.

It's great that you've joined the fanfic crowd! Yay you!

[tkross23]

Thank you!! That really means a lot to me :). I hope to keep coming up with more story ideas and hopefully I'll improve as I go.

I was worried about writing Nine (well Ten too, actually) so I hope I did him justice. I think Rose was attracted to the Doctor (and he to her) from the moment he took her hand and told her about the turn of the Earth, but that she didn't really acknowledge it as anything more until later. She definitely fell in love with him first though and that love endured through the regeneration (even though she sort of had to fall in love with him all over again), but their dynamic changed quite a bit.

[gallifrey_eire]

Brilliantly written, especially for your first fic! And well done on the smut as well- I doubt I'll ever be brave enough to write that!

I'm looking forward to more of your writing :)

[tkross23]

Thanks so much - that's a really sweet thing to say!
You never know about the smut. I really thought I'd never be able to do it, and here I am trying to write it on my first go ;).

[kelkat9]

TK you get a standing ovation :) I loved the slow build up and the wonderful Rose introspection and how she kept holding back until she was sure. I especially enjoyed how you used the dream to tie it all together. I really was a lovely fic!

[tkross23]

Ah, thanks so much KK! That really means a lot to me :). I was worried about whether or not the dream really tied it all together and struggled with the ending quite a bit.
I have an idea for another story but it is much plottier and would be a lot longer than this (and AU). I don't feel like I'm good at plotting at all and really admire those of you who are. It will be a challenge...

[develish1]

See, I told you they'd like it :)

And if you need a beta again feel free to ask me, I just hope I'm not so full of germs next time, lol

[tkross23]

Thanks Dev! I hope you are feeling better.
If I can get my muse going on this idea I have now, I will definitely take you up on that.