when the sun comes looking

[sekichu]

when the sun comes looking, eleven/rose (hints of tentoo/rose), pg-16

He says that there are many things he can still do, but he does not often do them (teaching Rose Tyler, small and toothy, how to do long division is a particularly strange, persistent fantasy). No, he clings to his inaction and its potential of unexplored opportunities like a

Comments

[akumakoronso]

That was brilliant. Your wording astounds me.

[sekichu]

Thankyou kindly! <3

A bit oddly thrown together, I admit, but I am really glad you enjoyed it.

[someplacetobe]

I got lost within this very easily.

[sekichu]

Lost in a good way or a bad way? Hahaha, I am still strangers with the new LJ formatting, so it ends up doing all sorts of wonky things. P:

[someplacetobe]

Lost in a good way --- I got lost within my imagination as I read, imagining what was happening.

[sekichu]

Oh, yay! The spacing is a bit weird, but I am glad it worked for you.

[a_phoenixdragon]

Gorgeous...the imagery is like poetry, little snapshots of time and the thoughts that lie within them.

*HUGS*

[sekichu]

Awww ALL THE HUGS FOR YOU. <3

I am so excited that it read well for you. I am actually rubbish at poetry, but whaddya know!

[fogsblue]

This is clever and moving and quite lovely and flows so well. :)

[sekichu]

You are so sweet! Thank you so much for that. : )
I'm glad the flow was okay.
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