You stuck a dagger in my heart and twisted it, but it was a good sort of hurt, the kind that comes from angst that is written really well. Excellently done!
I cannot express how moving how found this fic. It was heartbreakingly beautiful on so many levels. You handled their ages difference with tact and their relationship worked within the story. The best stories are the ones that stay with you long after you have read them. I finished Ch.1 yesterday (on FFNet) and thought about where you would take them the rest of the day. I was so happy Ch.2 was waiting for me when I woke, even if it broke my heart to read it.
This line was perfection: There’s a house in the middle of a lake. It has a bright blue door that’s faded over time. It stands alone against the mountain skyline and the clear lake.
Thank you for a memorable tale, an instant favorite.
It was so lovely to read this review because this story is the first story in a looong time that's grabbed me and thrown me at the keyboard and made me write. I literally couldn't stop writing, taking any moment in between work to do this. I also wrote about subjects that I normally would shy away from such as the underage thing and smut so to hear that it actually paid off is so nice to hear.
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Btw I LOVE your icon, it made me giggle
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This line was perfection:
There’s a house in the middle of a lake. It has a bright blue door that’s faded over time. It stands alone against the mountain skyline and the clear lake.
Thank you for a memorable tale, an instant favorite.
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It was so lovely to read this review because this story is the first story in a looong time that's grabbed me and thrown me at the keyboard and made me write. I literally couldn't stop writing, taking any moment in between work to do this. I also wrote about subjects that I normally would shy away from such as the underage thing and smut so to hear that it actually paid off is so nice to hear.
So thank you :)
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